Aunt Matties Place

I love to reminisce about great Aunt Mattie. Her home perched atop of an old barber shop; a barber pole below her apartment told my young eyes that we’d arrived at her place. Her tiny space, smelled of a million confections and um, lilacs; house a plethora of oriental treasures; stories fed my wild imagination. She worked as a nurse but, she was born with a baker’s soul and she should have had her own bakery. The old candy cane pole was so appropriate; revealed her subconscious desires. I believed her canary sang so well; of sweet scents wafting silently throughout the rooms; he was so blessed to reside there inhaling the, buttery chocolate and caramel bliss. I was blessed to visit and savor them as I perused her, “what knots”; the Chinese dragons and lions who shared her home, her brass dragon gong, now lives with me; it still sings of her creations; each time that I awaken it and my palate joins the song, as I travel once again through, “what knot”, stories; breathing in butterscotch, cocoa and lilac memories.

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Date: 10/15/2018 11:31:00 AM
Mmmmm. Yummy, delicious, magical memories, so well expressed! :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 12:16:00 PM
Yes, she was really special...a very warm and inviting personality, but I guess that came in handy when she was nursing people. Thanks again.
Date: 10/14/2018 4:07:00 PM
This is a character sketch that brings Aunt Mattie into my home with me. I can taste her buttery chocolate caramel confections, and I see the Chinese dragon gong,and want to ring it desperately. The what knot really grabbed me and I had to put this on my FAV list. I had forgotten about "what knot" shelves until this poem. Thank you M.L. This poem is alive!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 10:19:00 AM
She had a lot of souvenirs from the Orient; some worth a lot that were marked, "Made in occupied Japan". I don't know what her kids did with them. I'm glad I brought her there for you to enjoy though; she really should have had her own bakery; she'd have made a fortune. Thanks again.
Date: 10/14/2018 2:58:00 PM
A wonderful walk in the memory lane..treasures that will live for a lifetime. I can feel the joy in your words of being able to host the lilac memories.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/15/2018 10:16:00 AM
My favorite great aunt. Thanks Vijay.
Date: 10/14/2018 1:16:00 PM
Replete with a canary, sounds positively enchanting :)) xomo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/14/2018 2:46:00 PM
Ah, the cuckoo clock, one of the sweetest memories of my grandparent's place :))
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/14/2018 1:38:00 PM
Oh it was; I forgot to mention her cuckoo clock. She was unique in that she still wore a corset in the 1970's. I don't know how she stood the thing but, it was always as if it were part of her. I do miss her though. Thanks so much.
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