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August Is a Misfortune Teller

Afternoon shadows lengthen too early Days shrink away into night's sultry grip Which restrains cheerful morning from welcoming Us back to life, and the pursuit of fleeting pleasures

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/13/2020 5:02:00 PM

I think you have it right. Beautifully worded piece.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 5:48:00 PM

Thanks for the 'Kiser Seal of Approval' on this one. Now, let's move on to mid-September!! ~ Not a Humidity Fan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/11/2020 10:19:00 AM

This summer feels endless to me, and not in a good way, but I just adore your title! Also like 'days shrink away' - very descriptive!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 5:47:00 PM

Thanks for the enthusiasm over this one, Michelle. Wish I could be as enthusiastic about August itself!! :) gw

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/10/2020 4:54:00 PM

Hello Gershon ... as you write about your coming winter, trees are budding up to bring colour and scents to us at the same time - thanks Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2020 8:40:00 PM

You can mention winter -- no problem. As long as you don't include that four letter word starting with s!!!