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August Haiku

in stifling dry heat wings flap in a cloudless sky . . . a bird soars upward Aug. 17, 2020 for Tania Kitchin's Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest written yesterday as I walked my dog and noticed a lone bird above me

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/26/2020 11:16:00 PM

Loved your August Haiku.. Congratulations on your win dear Andrea mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/24/2020 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Living life brings out many wonderful poems. Enjoy your win and day....................

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/23/2020 4:40:00 PM

Wow dear Andrea, so spectacular! I love the superb imagery of the ending line! A FAVE!!!! Big congrats!!!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2020 2:15:00 PM

Congrats on your top win. I could feel the dry air of flight.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2020 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea, great imagery. Hugs

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/22/2020 4:59:00 PM

Strong Haiku. At first glace, doesn't push the 'girly buttons' and cliche stuff. It's one that segments itself into the brain a little while after reading. Summer harsh truth snared in few words. Huge Congratulations!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2020 4:03:00 PM

Super imagery Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 8/22/2020 3:52:00 PM

You are always gifted at distilling your nature observations into the small confines of haiku. Congrats for the #1!

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/22/2020 2:34:00 PM

Hello Andrea, A first place medal for a first class work. Congratulations. Howard

P.M. Richter

Date: 8/22/2020 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 placement :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 8/22/2020 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your top win in Tania’s Haiku contest!! I love the great visuals in your piece!!

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/22/2020 1:35:00 PM

Well done, Andrea, our birds flutter in the dirt to cool themselves since they don't want to fly too high off the ground and lose sight of land--afterall, we are an island, Congrats and Aloha! William