August Evening



             cool evening air
   late August signals autumn
            colors on the way


Heidi Sands 

8/22/24

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Potd : 8/24/24
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Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 8:29 AM
Belated congratulations on POTD, Heidi. Here's to cool evening air! (Almost 100 degrees today in Chicago with sky-high humidity as well). Cheers, Gershon
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August 26, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Dear Heidi, I love Haikus and I love the Autumn and you have wonderfully shown the two together and therefore I love it! Congratulations on POTD!! - Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Daniel.
Liguori Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:47 PM
Congratulations!!!
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Thank you :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Congratulations on your POTD.
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Thank you Victor :)
mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:54 PM
make way! lovely dear poet. congratulations. happy writing.
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thank you very much :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:48 PM
Congratulations, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thank you Sibimal :)
Ireland Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:36 PM
Very evocative
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thank you Terry :)
Nicole Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:44 PM
I can handle the ' cool evening air. ' That's totally fine with me, because I love the feel of fall this time of year. I truly look forward to the vibrant colors of Autumn. Your thoughts take me there, Heidi. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:49 PM
I like the cool evening air too. Thank you Brandy. I appreciate your kindness. I hope you have a nice evening. Hugs :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:11 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Dear Heidi, masterfully crafted. Autumn is my favourite season. Congratulations on POTD.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind comment :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your special day. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:18 PM
Hello heidi, Your welcome. Hugs.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Darlene. Hugs :)
Gentile Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Heidi, a big congratulations on your POTD honors! Your seasonal haiku is indeed so worthy of it!! Enjoy your day xxoo
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:07 PM
Thanks so much Mike. Happy Saturday :)
Roper Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Beautiful verse, Heidi, congratulations on POTD.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:07 PM
Thank you Eve :)
May Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Congrats on POTD Heidi
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Thank you Joseph. :)
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August 24, 2024 at 8:52 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy the day :))) xomo
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Thank you very much Maureen :)
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August 24, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Hooray, for you. I enjoyed reading your lovely "August Evening" Haiku write. A story told in just 3 lines. Have a great/blessed ~ day/weekend writing away......................
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your support :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations, Heidi. Your lovely haiku is certainly deserving of the title POTD. Janice
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Thank you Janice. I appreciate it :)
Doll Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Heidi, nice haiku. Congratulations on POTD
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Thank you very much Warren:)
Kaufman Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Dear Heidi, A heartfelt congratulations on this masterful haiku. Autumn is my favorite of all the seasons and your succinct but timely words prepare us for it's impending glories. Blessings and enjoy your day.P.S. I must fav this one now.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much Nancy. I am happy to hear that :)
Empress Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Beautiful haiku, so well written dear heidi, congratulations on well deserved potd. Happy to see you featured. Sending you light
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:32 AM
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kindness :)
Kitchin Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Heidi, nicely done, congratulations on POTD.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Tania :)
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:06 AM
- Lovely, Heidi :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise . Hugs :)
Greenhough Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:28 AM
This is clever. I saw trees. Thank you and congratulations on POTD.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Thank you Hilda :)
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August 24, 2024 at 2:07 AM
I've often wondered why, when the summer is full of vibrant colours, the autumnal colours are those that captivate us, I think it might be a lower sun giving a different light, anyway, you captured this wonderfully, nice write and well done for potd Heidi
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Thank you very much :)
Jones Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:03 AM
Nice Haiku and congratulations on your potd honor!
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Thank you very much Karen :)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 1:52 AM
Yes. I can't wait. I love Fall. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. love, Gina
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Thank you Regina . Enjoy :)
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