August End

The castellated treeline frames a hazy setting sun ,
lone hawk looks out for prey in silhouette,
the overture to twilight's next performance has begun,
it's audience are still, the stage is set.
As pastel greens and yellows turn to neutral greys and blues,
the dusk rinses the sky from East to West,
hay bales litter fields, witness to busy days,
spread out like an unfinished game of chess.
Leaves slowly turning copper ,signs of dying Summer's embers,
While cooling air reminds in whispered promise of September.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:28 PM
I'll buy that picture Viv. We need to look for the beauty and hope in all things. A timeles peice well crafted. Good to see you some gems left to give us . Fondest regards David in NZ
Wigley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:43 PM
Thanks, David, hope all is well in upside-down land. Regards, Viv
Inman Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:09 AM
So many beautiful lines here. A regalia of words and images. The first line sets the stage upon which nature plays out one of the longest running performances in the history of the world. "castellated treeline," love that phrase.
Wigley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:44 PM
Thanks, James, 'Castellated' is such a great word, never used enough. Well, since we stopped building castles, anyway. Regards, Viv
Carmack Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 8:32 PM
Hey Viv, I am liking the bales to the game of chess and the leaves to the embers. I like how you set the scenes in this.
Wigley Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 2:45 AM
Thanks, Rob, composed it on a coach returning from the Norfolk coast last week, before sunset. Regards, Viv
Murray Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 6:48 AM
Please say it isn't so...I'm not ready for autumn Viv.
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Where you live, I'd embrace it, Jean. Thanks for dropping by, my lovely x
Daniel Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 9:30 AM
So beautiful, great choice of words, Viv:)
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Jobs, glad you like it x
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August 27, 2017 at 8:33 AM
- A wonderful poem, Viv ... welcome September - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Taak, Anne-Lise, you live in a country where every season is a drama. Lucky you x
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