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Written on August 22, 2023

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Gentle light flows through the pines, Inviting the oaks, the laurels, to sigh, Echoing soft breath, smoke rising – Mist in the sky, a moment of silence Breaks the song, playing on the crisp morn’ This is summer’s sadness, when August Shadows the heat, the sweltering thoughts Erasing July quicker than sunlight erases The dew from tender petals who remember Only the beginnings of dawn’s presence Soon, Autumn will write its lyrics in dancing Leaves, vibrant promises of scarlet and gold, Enchanting the dreams with laughing hues, Music playing quietly on the still, cool morning When a heart reaches through the misty air This is the best recollection of the autumnal Wings, airborne, soaring gracefully over the Trembling skies – into the endless veils, vapors Still, ashen clouds, mysteries in the heavens, Inspiring poetry from those who write visions… Warmest wishes, feelings like leaves faded Beneath the strongest branches, oaks and birch, Inspirations beguiling the moon to heed the stars, Blow away the doubts from the storms, rains falling Melodiously, stirring the embers of a heart, a soul August noon awaits the temptations so soon removed, Washed away by the fond webs, the drying memories, In tones of ashen amber, soothing auburn, reflections Breathing out psalms along the mountain ridges, Repeating the trembling hopes, the dreams of a spirit Eminent woes, memories peeled away in layers – Intimate and healing, reassuring that fall will be what it will be, Always alive with reflections, embraces, traces of hope, Heartfelt desires and wondering affections kissing the truth, Abiding inside those who know this is God’s unfinished painting – This is the treasure of summer poured out in wistful Memories and promises, prayers for the seasonal grace, The inspirational – the thanks, given to the One who Captured light and poured it across the earth in one enchanting Explosion of amazing, marvelous, stunning – even the greatest poet Can’t write a wonder like that – His hand, His sculpture, His creation… baffles even the most confident artiste With God, there is no impossibility and no reason for upset With Him, not only autumn, not just august, but the entire heart – the whole life, the entire soul – is blessed!

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Date: 10/6/2023 3:08:00 PM
Always an amazing experience reading you Gina. You always draw the spiritual essence from the physical experience and so I enjoyed this immensely.
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Date: 9/9/2023 9:10:00 AM
Wow, it was really an amazing free verse. Quite inspiring!
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Date: 8/28/2023 4:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... your poems which i always admire...beautiful, Gina :) - hugs
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Date: 8/27/2023 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2023 6:45:00 AM
Hearty congratulations on your well-deserved contest win with this lovely poem. Your imagery is unparalleled, painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind and leaving a lasting impression.
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Date: 8/22/2023 11:11:00 PM
Even the greatest poet cant write such a wonder. This is so moving, heartfelt and poetic how you’ve written in such a creative and descriptive manner, painting imagery just effortlessly. “ inspirations beguiling the moon to heed the stars” that line truly left me in awe. Such thoughtful and intriguing lines, and the way you use nature to convey such wisdom and thoughts is so profound
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Date: 8/22/2023 11:10:00 AM
My friend you have gifted us a top level poem. So many wonderful verses. A fav..
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Date: 8/22/2023 9:06:00 AM
Gina, this is such bliss as we travel through the transition from summer in your beautiful poem. It feels strange as I am now overwhelmed by the sweet smell of Jasmin as we are leaving Winter and Spring is almost here. I will save this in my favorites and send myself a reminder to re-read this splendid poem as our Summer ends next year.
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Date: 8/22/2023 4:48:00 AM
This piece definitely blew my mind! Such an extraordinary wordsmithery with graceful flow, presenting such an exquisite scenic bliss in front of the eyes.. I am in awe of your surreal and magical writing style, truly captivates my heart always.. You've perfectly extracted the essence of autumnal ambience and blended it with the wisdom, depth and feelings of your own soul's lyrics.. Love this! :)
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