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August

sunflower fields shine 
as though the sun has come down ---
parrots all around

midst red daisy fields 
The sun, lo, plays hide and seek ---
doors around are shut

land tired and dried up
drizzles, yet, visit sometimes ---
Utopian earth

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Date: 8/20/2023 1:53:00 AM
"Misty red daisy fields", " Utopian earth" The wordplay is so eloquent here, giving such a vibrant and refreshing touch to this piece.. Such an impeccable poetic tapestry..
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/20/2023 4:38:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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