August

August

Along the backroads black-eyed susans snooze
Unfazed and unaffected by August’s humid hand
Growing tall with Queen Anne’s Lace beside roadside stands,
Utopias of sweet white corn, farm fresh beans and blackberries,
Shaded by shadows of leafy walnut trees, a dusty road romance,
Tabernacles of tranquility in summer’s fertile siestas.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Ahhhh..It is such a wonderful time of year. If I close my eyes and heard your poem, all my senses would come alive. My birthday is in August and my husband used to live on a farm that still stands with his 95 year old mother. Your poem describes his old farm road and the 2 of us, as we walk it's back road each summer. I want to jump into your poem, it would be like entering his old farm home.
Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Hi Marikate! What precious memories we share. There is truly something special about the experience of a back road and a country home in the summer. My grandparents had a summer house on an island where I spent hours picking blackberries with my grandmother, going to the local county fair, climbing apple trees or walking on the beach looking for limpets! I believe this place fostered my imagination and has left me with amazing memories. Thank you for sharing your memories! Warmed my heart even in autumn! Blessings!
Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:10 PM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, I'm enthralled with the rich vibrant imagery of your August poem. The spirit of late summer is captured with enchanting verse and lovely strings of alliteration. Such a serene and sweet scene unfolds upon the poetic page. Your splendid imagery brings me there, "Along the backroads (where) black-eyed susans snooze", with the ease of a summer breeze. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes sent on the waning scents of summer.. ~Susan
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:04 AM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, summer has flown like waves on the shore and I am, just now, catching up with dear friends! This poem was born out of lazy, summer afternoons wandering back roads and exploring roadside stands. So much fun to both remember then put those magical moments into a poem. Funny, the memories and images almost wrote themselves for they are so vivid and truly a precious part of my summers. And, it is always more fun to explore with a friend, sweet poetry sis! Thank you for your beautiful message. Warms my heart like summer sunshine. Sending you many warm blessings to warm your heart as autumn spreads her wings over the earth!
Miller Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:20 AM
GREAT acrostic; congratulations.
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Terry, many thanks and much gratitude for your congratulations and wonderful feedback! Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:11 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in the autumn contest, Sam :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Greetings, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your congratulations. I am so glad you got to share in the summer magic of country roads with me! This poem came from precious memories of many summers. Sending you blessings and a hug!
Merryman Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive of August in the country! Congrats on your win, Sam! Blessings, Kim M
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Hi Kim! Well, here it is autumn and I am just catching up on summer! Sigh! Thank you for your lovely feedback and walking these enchanting country roads with me. Blessings of autumn joy to you!
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on a most picturesque win, Sam. Terry
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you so much Terry! Have spent many a happy afternoon savoring the beauty of August wandering quiet backroads! Blessings to you!
Canerdy Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Sam, CONGRATS on your win with this descriptive piece. Janice
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thank you so much Janice! This poem led me back to lazy summer afternoons and the magic of August! Now that our summer has passed into cozy memories, sending you blessings of autumn joy!
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:10 AM
"...a dusty road romance..." - love it dear Sam. Congratulations! :)
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Hi Linda! I am so grateful for your wonderful feedback and congratulations! Indeed, I have a romantic relationship with dusty, back roads in August. Was fun to try to put those precious, magic moments into words. Thank you for sharing in my joy! Blessings of joy to you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Fantastic images, Sam. i love this. Congrats.
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! Spent many a summer wandering in the romance of dusty back roads, sampling blackberries, admiring the wildflowers and exploring the roadside stands. This theme reminded me of your poems about being on your grandparents farm. Truly magical experiences. Blessings to you!
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August 25, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Terrific! Your Acrostic, Sam, beams a bonanza of summer riches. Congratulations! Brian
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Hi Brian! Well here it is fall and I'm just catching up from summer! I am so glad this poem brought you into the magic of lazy August days. Thank you for sharing in those magical, yet fleeting, moments and for your congratulations! Blessings and cheers!
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August 12, 2023 at 11:01 AM
I love how skillfully you wove this together, Sam, especially since 'U' words can be difficult, but 'unfazed' and 'utopias' work so well here, I can feel the warm sweetness of an August afternoon~
Kauffman Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Thank you so much Michelle. It was fun to weave both of those words into this poem. They just seemed to fit! I love how you describe a lazy August afternoon - "warm sweetness." Blessings of summer joy to you! I can't believe August is almost half over! Here come Indian summers in the NW!
May Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 2:50 PM
I like the first line line of this well crafted Acrostic, Well done Sam
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Hi Joseph! Thank you so much! One of my favorite memories is driving country backroads in August, buying white corn at roadside stands on the way to visiting friends at their lake house for a long weekend! It just seemed perfect for the contest. Sending you blessings of summer joy!
Bauer Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 12:57 PM
wow! this is wonderful, sam!
Kauffman Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much Ilene! Driving along country back roads with all of the roadside stands is such a wonderful memory. Thanks for enjoying these memories with me! Blessings.
Hind Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 5:34 PM
A beautiful acrostic! Loved it!
Kauffman Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 8:10 PM
This was such a fun theme that brought memories of roadside produce stands and exploring country roads on summer vacations in August! Thank you! So happy you loved it! Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Very nice imagery, Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Precious summer memories! Thank you Kim! Blessings on your summer backroad adventures.
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