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August

August morphs into a hot, humid sauna,
Ushering in the dog days of Summer's end.
Gladiolus, little swords, sway in the breeze,
Under the mid-day heat of a blazing sun.
Soon, the treetops will start flaunting Fall colors,
Transforming green into scarlet and orange.
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Date: 9/4/2023 6:38:00 PM
Dear Emile, your late summer poem captures the feel of August beautifully. I enjoyed your vibrant imagery especially "Gladiolus, little swords, sway in the breeze" - just wonderful! Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/5/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thanks, Susan; it is always a pleasure to hear from you, my friend, as always, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 8/28/2023 3:23:00 AM
great imagery, brilliant acrostic; congratulations.
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Date: 8/28/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thanks, Terry; I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2023 7:15:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem in the Autumn contest, Emile :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise; as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/26/2023 8:14:00 PM
I totally agree with you about August feeling like a hot humid sauna! Beautiful images! Congrats on your win, Emile! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/27/2023 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, Kim; I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/26/2023 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this acrostic Emile and I so enjoyed the recitation. :) Congratulations my dear friend! :)
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Date: 8/26/2023 2:04:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, it is always nice to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/26/2023 10:40:00 AM
Loved the imagery, Emile. I guess my favoritism toward rhyme is the only reason this did not place slightly higher. Congrats for the podium win in my contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/26/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/7/2023 3:29:00 PM
Hello Emile, We must enjoy what is left of the summer season. To bad that summer is not a longer season. that would be wonderful instead of winter. Mufriend enjoy your evening. /darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2023 11:03:00 AM
Hello Emile, thank you Emile. Your welcome my friend. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene\
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments; it is always nice to hear from you, my friend; Emile.
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