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August Acrostic Sponored By Andrea Dietrich

Written 8/6/2023

August a month of birthdays and death. Upon the death of my soulmate's breath. Gifts of love, a grandson's birthday. Use of time together summer play. Stillness, unending time of fill strife. Trials which are to come in my life.

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Date: 8/28/2023 7:57:00 PM
It seems August is a month of mixed feelings for you, Eve! I'm glad there are some happy ones. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/27/2023 9:42:00 AM
Dear Eve, both sadness and happiness are represented in your expressive August poem. Eloquent in its stirring imagery and emotion. Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:44:00 AM
Bittersweet Eve. I love your rhyming. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:07:00 AM
It sounds like August holds sad memories for you, Eve. I liked the mention of a grandchild's birthday and the fact that you rhymed your poem. Thanks for entering and congrats.
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Date: 8/10/2023 5:01:00 AM
H Eve my good friend, one soul was leaving earth soon, The Greek Orthodox faith believes that a soul will be around in your space for 6 weeks, until he/she moves on. and as that soul goes up a new soul and spirit is awaiting to be delivered to Planet Earth. Sad but true one day not for a long while however, because your grandson loves and needs, you, but you will meet your soulmate again and will meet up him. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/7/2023 10:58:00 PM
A very creative acrostic for this month my dear poet friend Eve. I love and enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Happy Birthday to your grandson. Thanks for sharing this precious gem. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs Soupmail.
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Date: 8/7/2023 9:12:00 AM
Your depictions of the summer season are truly remarkable. Exquisitely crafted, good luck with the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
Awe, thank you.
Date: 8/7/2023 8:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your grandson's birthday, Eve - Lovely written ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, my Adam's birthday is on the 17, brother in-laws this Saturday his X this Saturday plus so many more, and Roper's anniversary 5 years this 29. So, some happy day, some sad and end of summer vacation for the kids. My grandgirl's senior year in high school and off to college .

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