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Attractive To Others

People admire me as I walk down the street, They point at me, not being discreet, I have green hair and metal in my face, Purple pants, a shirt frilled with lace, My good looks must makes hearts skip a beat.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/17/2015 6:42:00 PM

G'day John... be careful of anyone with a metal detector... or someone with poor eyesight who traps parrots. Laughed at this one - Lindsay

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:06:00 PM

I will keep a look out Lindsay----glad it gave you a laugh.........thanks for stopping by....kind regards John.....PS: very funny comment

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/17/2015 5:19:00 PM

oh...but there's something in my eye...I can't see...hehe...Nice one, John!

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:07:00 PM

Good morning Kim, glad it gave you a giggle........kind regards----John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2015 10:48:00 AM

yes, this one is great farce!

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for stopping by and your lovely comment.....kind regards----John

Nandita Das

Date: 5/17/2015 9:06:00 AM

Or two....LOL...7

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:11:00 PM

Thanks Nandita-----any bloke purple pants should get a 7---haha-----kind regards---John

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2015 7:52:00 AM

ha ha ha simply hilarious:-) Hugs jan xx 7

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:12:00 PM

Is that a 7 for the poem or the frilly shirt...haha...Thanks Jan

Anna Hopper

Date: 5/17/2015 7:47:00 AM

You go with it, handsome man! Nice rhyme!

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:13:00 PM

Yes Anna, dress sense means everything. haha...Thanks for stopping by......John

Peter Dome

Date: 5/17/2015 7:02:00 AM

Lucky thing. I'm invisible, must be, people try to walk through me. loved this well done Pete.

John Williams
Date: 5/17/2015 7:15:00 AM

Thanks Peter, I am glad you liked it---yes Peter, I have the same problem--in fact one day when I was in a tunnel and people walked clean over the top of me.............kind regards----John