Attractive To Others

People admire me as I walk down the street,
     They point at me, not being discreet,
   I have green hair and metal in my face,
    Purple pants, a shirt frilled with lace,
My good looks must makes hearts skip a beat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/17/2015 6:42:00 PM
G'day John... be careful of anyone with a metal detector... or someone with poor eyesight who traps parrots. Laughed at this one - Lindsay
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:06:00 PM
I will keep a look out Lindsay----glad it gave you a laugh.........thanks for stopping by....kind regards John.....PS: very funny comment
Date: 5/17/2015 5:19:00 PM
oh...but there's something in my eye...I can't see...hehe...Nice one, John!
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:07:00 PM
Good morning Kim, glad it gave you a giggle........kind regards----John
Date: 5/17/2015 10:48:00 AM
yes, this one is great farce!
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for stopping by and your lovely comment.....kind regards----John
Date: 5/17/2015 9:06:00 AM
Or two....LOL...7
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Nandita-----any bloke purple pants should get a 7---haha-----kind regards---John
Date: 5/17/2015 7:52:00 AM
ha ha ha simply hilarious:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:12:00 PM
Is that a 7 for the poem or the frilly shirt...haha...Thanks Jan
Date: 5/17/2015 7:47:00 AM
You go with it, handsome man! Nice rhyme!
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:13:00 PM
Yes Anna, dress sense means everything. haha...Thanks for stopping by......John
Date: 5/17/2015 7:02:00 AM
Lucky thing. I'm invisible, must be, people try to walk through me. loved this well done Pete.
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Peter, I am glad you liked it---yes Peter, I have the same problem--in fact one day when I was in a tunnel and people walked clean over the top of me.............kind regards----John
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