John Williams Poet Limerick

Attractive To Others

People admire me as I walk down the street,
     They point at me, not being discreet,
   I have green hair and metal in my face,
    Purple pants, a shirt frilled with lace,
My good looks must makes hearts skip a beat.

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Lindsay Laurie May 17, 2015 at 6:42 PM G'day John... be careful of anyone with a metal detector... or someone with poor eyesight who traps parrots. Laughed at this one - Lindsay John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:06 PM I will keep a look out Lindsay----glad it gave you a laugh.........thanks for stopping by....kind regards John.....PS: very funny comment

Kp Nunez May 17, 2015 at 5:19 PM oh...but there's something in my eye...I can't see...hehe...Nice one, John! John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:07 PM Good morning Kim, glad it gave you a giggle........kind regards----John

Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2015 at 10:48 AM yes, this one is great farce! John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:08 PM Thanks Andrea for stopping by and your lovely comment.....kind regards----John

Nandita Das May 17, 2015 at 9:06 AM Or two....LOL...7 John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:11 PM Thanks Nandita-----any bloke purple pants should get a 7---haha-----kind regards---John

Jan Allison May 17, 2015 at 7:52 AM ha ha ha simply hilarious:-) Hugs jan xx 7 John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:12 PM Is that a 7 for the poem or the frilly shirt...haha...Thanks Jan

Anna Hopper May 17, 2015 at 7:47 AM You go with it, handsome man! Nice rhyme! John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:13 PM Yes Anna, dress sense means everything. haha...Thanks for stopping by......John

Peter Dome May 17, 2015 at 7:02 AM Lucky thing. I'm invisible, must be, people try to walk through me. loved this well done Pete. John Williams May 17, 2015 at 7:15 AM Thanks Peter, I am glad you liked it---yes Peter, I have the same problem--in fact one day when I was in a tunnel and people walked clean over the top of me.............kind regards----John