Attention Deficit Disorder

A rock for you, mountain for me
Why am I defeated so easily

I put on my pants one leg at a time
That's where there lives an invisible line

Marking the difference between you and I
Explaining my crawl as you fly high

Looking down from your castle
You view me a hassle

I try and try
Excuses run dry

My race is over before it begins
Victoriously, you meet me at the end

Still pep in your step, energy to spare
A turtle minus a shell, I feel so bare

If only I could slow my train of thought
Perhaps I could achieve the life I've sought

But my wheels keep on turning
Wasted energy, I'm burning

Thinking and thinking
Steadily sinking

I start feeling better when I take a pill
Mind thinking clearer, but thinking still

When will I upgrade from thought to action
The cause comes easy, but where's the reaction

Bounteous ideas floating around
The problem, I find, is pinning one down

My mind can chisel the perfect creation
Birthed and deceased in my imagination

A woman with a brain, packed full of intellect
Mouse hovering the button, can't click select

Day in and day out
Goals die and new ones sprout

Nothing is better to excite
Than a new vision when it ignites

But then I notice how my life is compacted
And easily I become too distracted

I try solving the fraction in my mind
Soon realizing, I'm out of time

Another fresh start, I didn't see finish
Perhaps over night, I will replenish

I've realized the truth and admit how it stung
A gritty feel and bitter taste tattooed on my tongue

I'm merely a hamster, the world my wheel
Making no way, but running still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horn Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Anna, This is a great poem and will have to prepare a poetic reply to it. I just printed it out. I have a grandson who has ADD who id eight years old. Jim Horn
Hopper Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 7:53 PM
I feel honored that you printed it out. Let me know when you have a poetic reply. God bless you and your grandson!
Kiser Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 4:13 PM
That can not be an easy condition to deal with but, it hasn't hurt your poetry, one bit; it's great! Kee'em com'in!
Horn Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 5:28 AM
My nine year old grandson has it. I think that mine is a short term memory loss. I have a great long term and my wife has a good short term. How did you like the new Jurassic Park film? Jill thought main actor lacked chance to expand his talents and movie drug on.
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:04 AM
I work with many children who have this condition you have portrayed it oh so vividly:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Hopper Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:31 PM
I have adult ADD so i know how it feels from the inside. :(. Thanks for stopping by! ;)
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