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Attention Deficit Disorder

A rock for you, mountain for me
Why am I defeated so easily

I put on my pants one leg at a time
That's where there lives an invisible line

Marking the difference between you and I
Explaining my crawl as you fly high

Looking down from your castle
You view me a hassle

I try and try
Excuses run dry

My race is over before it begins
Victoriously, you meet me at the end

Still pep in your step, energy to spare
A turtle minus a shell, I feel so bare

If only I could slow my train of thought
Perhaps I could achieve the life I've sought

But my wheels keep on turning
Wasted energy, I'm burning

Thinking and thinking
Steadily sinking

I start feeling better when I take a pill
Mind thinking clearer, but thinking still

When will I upgrade from thought to action
The cause comes easy, but where's the reaction

Bounteous ideas floating around
The problem, I find, is pinning one down

My mind can chisel the perfect creation
Birthed and deceased in my imagination

A woman with a brain, packed full of intellect
Mouse hovering the button, can't click select

Day in and day out
Goals die and new ones sprout

Nothing is better to excite
Than a new vision when it ignites

But then I notice how my life is compacted
And easily I become too distracted

I try solving the fraction in my mind
Soon realizing, I'm out of time

Another fresh start, I didn't see finish
Perhaps over night, I will replenish

I've realized the truth and admit how it stung
A gritty feel and bitter taste tattooed on my tongue

I'm merely a hamster, the world my wheel
Making no way, but running still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/13/2015 7:17:00 AM
Anna, This is a great poem and will have to prepare a poetic reply to it. I just printed it out. I have a grandson who has ADD who id eight years old. Jim Horn
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Anna Hopper
Date: 6/13/2015 7:53:00 PM
I feel honored that you printed it out. Let me know when you have a poetic reply. God bless you and your grandson!
Date: 6/9/2015 4:13:00 PM
That can not be an easy condition to deal with but, it hasn't hurt your poetry, one bit; it's great! Kee'em com'in!
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James Horn
Date: 6/14/2015 5:28:00 AM
My nine year old grandson has it. I think that mine is a short term memory loss. I have a great long term and my wife has a good short term. How did you like the new Jurassic Park film? Jill thought main actor lacked chance to expand his talents and movie drug on.
Date: 6/9/2015 11:04:00 AM
I work with many children who have this condition you have portrayed it oh so vividly:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Anna Hopper
Date: 6/9/2015 3:31:00 PM
I have adult ADD so i know how it feels from the inside. :(. Thanks for stopping by! ;)

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