Atta Girl

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She took the last beer
Without asking
Not caring if he was interested
Her priority was her third
Her third beer of the morning
After all she was on vacation
What could we do
She’d made her choice
With mouths agape
We all stood there
And saw her choose the bottle
Over allegedly the love of her life
Atta Girl… May you both be happy
You and your beer

                                                                                                                                                                                              

AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on September 17, 2019

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Eric Ashford

Date: 9/18/2019 10:03:00 AM

Nice write. Enjoyed this. Good strong theme.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2019 2:51:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Eric.