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Atta Girl

She took the last beer
Without asking
Not caring if he was interested

Her priority was her third
Her third beer of the morning
After all she was on vacation

What could we do
Atta Girl…
She’d made her choice

With mouths agape
We all stood there
And saw her choose the bottle

Over allegedly the love of her life
Atta Girl… May you both be happy
You and your beer

                                                                                                                                                                                              

AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Nice write. Enjoyed this. Good strong theme.
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Eric.
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