For contest sponsored by Constance LaFrance written 11/23/25
“Finger of God stirs Atlantic Ocean We watch in awe moved by it’s motion” Quote by poet Making footprints on beach white sands Sunset dipping into warm ocean like hands Salty call of fall in blue breeze Magical waves cascade crashing Atlantic Ocean warm and pearly October sky rises early Within sea creatures are at home Swimming in a current strong We gaze as the sea offers fish Sea gulls diving and seldom miss We enjoy colorful cloudy art Frames the Atlantic as a star Such beauty yet dangerous too Not as easy as swimming pool Each year current takes life a sacrifice Swimmers who tried but drown inside And of the sharks beware it’s true You can end up being fish food too Atlantic Ocean with its wonderful sprays Beautiful in it nights and it’s days
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