At Trickling's End


As winter brings shortened light,
as famine delivers harvest blight
So does violence yield premature burial gain,
scarlet tears of Noah’s premonition rain
Crimson tidal force,
deluge of cursed, wolf bane rage
Crescent moon dreadfully presage
a permanent lunar retrograde

On the dark side of the bosom, 
sunspot thoughts flow terminally so, err bottomless
Feral feelings blindly comes from
malevolent eruptions,
igneous fears reflect opaque tears of hardened glass

Eclipse hearts 
cast an angry downpour — 
What does the ill-temper tempest send?
Underbelly hourglass
receives not 
another vex overturn at trickling’s end

Rejoice, rejoice
ye peaceful pilgrims 
of quantum hope certainty
The celestial sands of tranquility
will soon pour infinitely

As the last Revolution spins 
identical change,
the mammon thirst for power 
remains the same
Punctuated by perforated voices,
whose hateful noise
stains the grain 


1-30-21

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/26/2021 5:43:00 AM
Your use of imagery is superb my friend. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 3/20/2021 10:01:00 AM
This is a powerful poem. Well written Freddie! I hope things are going ok for you and you have a nice day today :)
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Date: 3/14/2021 2:52:00 PM
Freddie, 'The celestial sands of tranquility will soon pour infinitely' I traced the lines back to a great orator and poet. -Richard
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Date: 2/26/2021 9:05:00 AM
That's quite a poem. You penned it really well. Stay blessed. Regards
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Date: 2/17/2021 3:47:00 AM
That's a compassionate compelling write a volatile virtuous verse peace and blessings always miss your gift! WRITE ON Forever and always : ) James
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Date: 2/12/2021 8:42:00 PM
Wow, Classic poetry at it's best, Freddie, enjoyed this wonderful poem. Stay Safe... Harry
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:11:00 AM
You pour all your emotion into your words, not wasting one little drop.
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