Premiere Contest WinnerAt Thy Command

The grain of wheat 
dies 
at Thy command
unconscious
of Your living
in its shell
turning it to life 
giving bread 
perpetuating it 
ages 
without end
nursing it with rain 
and sunny smiles 
from seed to stalk
a golden social plant
bowing its seeded
hairy head
in breezy dance
with poppy skirts 
in red 
illumed by a ruby
sunset veil
with robin breasts
singing gratitude
before the night 
descends 
its blinding veil
to equalizes colors' 
vibrant hues
in noncompeting 
shades 
of resting black
switching lights 
of distant 
trembling lamps
luminous smile
of vagrant onion slice
to make of night 
a little less 
than death
before awaking
to splendor 
rosy rays
sparkling diamonds
on grassy 
finger hands
that mist to vanish
then return to play 
hanging water lamps
on leaves and branches
that drip into the throat 
of parched earth 
to feed the roots 
and soften seeds 
to sprout 
perennial cycle
feeding 
and being fed
and all creation 
obeying
seems content
except for man
to whom You gave will
to obey or to dissent
the pupil of Your eyes
You call friend
by interests 
daily affairs
being led astray
the banquet ready
for repentant heir
all set with such glorious
royal splendor
no eyes have ever seen
nor ears have heard
the marvel of a joy
without compare
beyond the imagined 
no pen can write
only faith can travel

Brian Strand: First place Trophy Winner- Your Choice Again-2/20/24
Brian Strand-You Say-Third Place Winner-3/14/23
First Place Winner: Brian Strand- All yours-1/17/21
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Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 10:33 AM
What a wonderful integration of beautiful scripture images. I was swept up in the loveliness of your lyrical words. No greater words than to hear "good and faithful friend!" Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you!
Poet Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 5:31 AM
Lovely and so well-penned poem, Frances. Congratulations on your contest win.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Congrats on your top placement. God bless you
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