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At the Summit

The golden sun greets the dewdrops forming in the eyes Such a beautiful connection with the heavenly warmth from above Meditating with the silent mountains breathing is the only sound You hear the wind tugging at your hoodie tempting to topple you You hold on with the gravity growing inside as each thought passes by When the lips move to make a sound it simply evaporates into thin air Water droplets floating upwards to the heavens to once again be clouds Poem is inspired by Erdenebulgan Photography (The photo showing a person sitting at the top of a summit looking to the rising sun)

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Date: 5/31/2016 10:39:00 AM
"The golden sun greets the dewdrops forming in the eyes" << This is a golden line to me! Very vivid opener. Awesome descriptive poem, Angie ... though I don't know about the actual photo you are talking about, it almost doesn't seem necessary, as you paint the scene rather vividly with your words ... the most beautiful things often evoke a sense of vertigo! PS. I replied to your Soup Mail message ...
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 6/2/2016 1:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for the detailed comment. Feels good to be appreciated ;)

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