At the Pawnshop- Contest

I spied it in the window, wasn’t very plain to see
Cos the glass was very mucky, the price I cannot read

Tentatively went into the shop, was dark couldn’t see the way
The man was old and bent, I hesitantly asked to see the tray

It was a lovely emerald, green as the grass at home
Looked longing at it, wishing it was my own

The old man said try it on I smiled and did as I was told
Fitted as though made for me, wish I could mark it as sold

He said looking at me, your eyes match this lovely stone
Belonged to my dear wife she would love you to call it your own

I said I couldn’t afford it, he said there is a way
Would you call in each evening cook me a meal to pay

For the last 6 months I have done that also cleaned the place some
Looks a better place to live and work, it now feels more like home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Congrats on your winning poem. well done :)
Roberts Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Seosamh ...Seren
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Seren, I enjoyed this wonderful tale. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Roberts Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Hi Conne many thx ....Seren
A  Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 12:49 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
Roberts Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:50 AM
thanks SKAT ...Seren
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 10:41 PM
Very nice happy ending. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:51 AM
Thank you Joyce
Lanre Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 9:52 PM
I laughed after reading this one. Congrats .Gl
Roberts Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:51 AM
Hi goodness Thanks for stopping by ...Seren
Pettit Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your win, Seren
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Thank you Robert ...Seren
A   Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Seren,, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Thx Linda ....Seren
Guzzi Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Wonderful, wonderful story telling! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Thank you Debbie ...Seren
Thomas Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 5:27 AM
Hi seren, Awhh this is so sweet , loved it!!!!! Really touching:) Great poem, thankyou 4 sharing:0)
Roberts Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Cherie ....Seren
Sivey Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 5:56 AM
It almost feels as if you have done something like this before, very awesome write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 4:10 AM
Thanks for the comment Russell, lol you sit here alone...Seren
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