At the Pawnshop

I was in the local pawnshop
When a lovely watch I spied
Just like the one my mother wore
When she was my daddy's bride.

She lost it in our big house fire.
I remember how she cried.
Mama reminisced about it
Until the very day she died.

I knew then that I would buy it,
I simply could not turn aside.
Daddy never could replace it
Though I know how hard he tried.

The price was truly outrageous
Mom would have been horrified.
My prayer is that generations
Wear that golden watch with pride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hill Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 9:00 PM
what a find....I hope this is a true story!
Bauer Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 7:00 PM
nice one, joyce! i enjoyed...congrats!
De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Beautifully written, Congrats on your winning poem.
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Joyce enjoyed this rhyme for ''At The Pawn Shop'. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
May Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 5:58 AM
congrats on a great win Joyce
A  Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 12:50 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
Lanre Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 9:48 PM
Hmm... Joyce. Some great lines there. Congrats on your win. Gl
Gorelick Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 7:21 PM
My kind of poem Joyce. congrats...BG
Pettit Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 4:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. It seems any gifts I ever give anybody do not last long. A silver dollar I gave to my late aunt was stolen two weeks later. A doll I gave to a friend for a Christmas gift was destroyed in a fire several months later.
A   Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Joyce, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend, Loved always, bl
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