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At the Moment. . .

Long ago before many days and months, At the days we shared everything, There was a twilight- that Noticed the things we did. . Other than that none spotted our chats. And the allocated time to Assign our remotely done works There U pulled me unto u. . I lost not only myself but Also my customs of originality Never ever wondered it would happen. . We laughed, we cried, we played by Imagining our every sweats was true My nail marks in your chest Your lip marks on my cheeks. . Could not judge it right or wrong- since We’re paired as couples in each dreams Embraced our weakest shape links We got lost along the ways. . . Never comes the days wherein- our hands together in my bed, your arms around my waist, our affectionate kisses at surface, your pull dragging my wrist, each of ours admiration and motivation, our doting numerous nick names, a very silly fights and a tight hugs after them, hot spellbind looks. Lost myself in subconscious migration-when U hypnotized my eye balls. whilst these all happened for abundant days including our mutual breakup. . Became conscious only after everything got over Every single moment flashed within a micro second, when I saw u through my bus window at yours-where U was found acting asleep with hands enclosing your face And realized I was vanished at the moment. . . ~ Hannah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/18/2010 10:24:00 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Hannah. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2010 9:22:00 AM
Awesome and insightful poem. Enjoyed the read! Love, Susan
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Date: 8/18/2010 9:18:00 AM
There was a twilight- that Noticed the things we did. . I love that line..keep the ink flowing....TAH
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