At the Inquiry

It’s really morbid, depressing, and sad,
at the gunpowder factory in town,
and the clean up is almost complete
since the factory was razed to the ground,
and here in the lounge of the tavern,
the inquiry’s about to begin,
‘cause this is where most of the workers, 
who witnessed what happened’s within.

And so poor Charlie Higgins’ deceased.
A friend to us drinkers here in the pub,
and the question is rife - ‘what happened?’
The investigator searched for the rub.
I listened to all of his workmates,
explain through the beer, sobs and their tears,
about being in shock; hearing the bang,
until Bertie Simpson quietly appears.

Now Charlie was Bert’s closest colleague,
where the gunpowder’s mixed in a room,
so here was the the only eye witness, 
who was there through the fire and the boom.
The investigator asked “so what happened?”
then all our eyes converged onto Bert,
who emptied his glass, and cleared his throat,
before his evidence to the expert.

“Charlie and I were in the mixing room,
when I saw Charlie lift a cigarette out,
and when he lit it I saw a few sparks.
The next thing I knew I was up and about.
The joint was like neon signs in a cyclone,  
filled with smoke when the flames died down,
I was dazed and confused and went looking,
to see where Charlie was hanging around.”

The investigator asked in stunned horror,
“Charlie smoked where gunpowder is made!
How long had he been working in there?”
Bert shrugged and said “more than a decade.”
“Ten years in a room filled with danger;
You’d think it’d be his last silly act!”
And Bert sniffed and wiped away tears,
“Well it was as a matter of fact.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/13/2018 2:44:00 PM
You tell a great tale Lindsay. Enjoyed the poem. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/27/2018 1:57:00 AM
Hello Phyllis … thanks for reading and commenting. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem - regards - Lindsay
Date: 6/3/2018 11:11:00 PM
You do weave a great tale, Lindsay, and that's a fact. I assume this was the bar of the Longwarry Hotel? Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/27/2018 1:55:00 AM
G'day Viv … oh no, not in Longwarry pub. The inquiry wouldn't get started unless the beer ran out - thanks Viv - Lindsay
Date: 6/3/2018 7:59:00 PM
Lindsay, your story telling and wit continue to amaze me - my kind of poetry. Many thx for your kind comments and encouragement re a couple of my recent concoctions. Best on you, old cobber - Bob
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Date: 6/27/2018 1:37:00 AM
G'day Robert … thanks for your encouraging comment Mate, and just remember, I get a lot of enjoyment out of reading your concoctions - regards - Lindsay
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