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At the Gallery One Day

I said, "I'm not an artist but you are a masterpiece in my mind." And he said, blushing, "Do you come to the art gallery often?" ______________________ April 30, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/At The Gallery One Day Copyright Protected, ID 04- 668-169-30 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Your best pick up line, sponsor, Judy Konos, Judged 2015 Second Place

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Date: 5/6/2015 5:16:00 PM
Fun! Nice job as always!!
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Date: 5/6/2015 10:04:00 AM
Hi Broken :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
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Date: 5/6/2015 9:35:00 AM
Broken, wow, that is a smooth one. and clever line. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/5/2015 9:23:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Date: 5/5/2015 8:09:00 PM
Perfect! Congratulations Nette.
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:13:00 PM
this is cute, Constance. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:03:00 PM
congratulations BW on your artful attempt to get a date :o)
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Date: 5/5/2015 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 5/5/2015 2:52:00 PM
Oh very clever this made me smile:-) hugs Jan and many congrats:-) xx
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Date: 4/30/2015 8:47:00 PM
I like your textures...J.A.B.
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Date: 4/30/2015 3:00:00 PM
Cute and sweet; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/30/2015 2:50:00 PM
Love the poem, a 7 and good luck, blessings and hugs Eve
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:22:00 PM
Very interesting pick up line with just the right amount of enthusiasm to wet appetites and solicit an emotional response. Emile.
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Date: 4/30/2015 11:04:00 AM
Good pick up line..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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