At the Gallery One Day



I said,  

    "I'm not an artist but you are a masterpiece in my mind."



 And he said, blushing,

     "Do you come to the art gallery often?"


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April 30, 2015


Poetry/Free Verse/At The Gallery One Day
Copyright Protected, ID 04- 668-169-30
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Your best pick up line, 
sponsor, Judy Konos, Judged 2015

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Martin Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Fun! Nice job as always!!
A  Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Hi Broken :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
A   Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Broken, wow, that is a smooth one. and clever line. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
Konos Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Perfect! Congratulations Nette.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:13 PM
this is cute, Constance. Congrats on the win.
Stoner Jr Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 5:03 PM
congratulations BW on your artful attempt to get a date :o)
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Oh very clever this made me smile:-) hugs Jan and many congrats:-) xx
Bordner Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 8:47 PM
I like your textures...J.A.B.
Kiser Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Cute and sweet; best of luck in the contest.
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Love the poem, a 7 and good luck, blessings and hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Very interesting pick up line with just the right amount of enthusiasm to wet appetites and solicit an emotional response. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Good pick up line..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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