At the Edge of Youth

As I hang from the edge of my youth, 
Legs dangling in empty space, 
I stare down at the beckoning ground 
And dream of sleep after the fall;
With feeble faith I leap and leave
The sidewalk splattered in frail innards,
Watching mad beggars sniffing
For food, toothless grins buried 
In tangled beards laced with lice, 
Hands outstretched for blood or bone. 
Have I none to spare? 
They ask with a sideways glance, 
As their dead sons and daughters 
Drift in with the turbid tide,
Peacefully asleep on a bed of foam, 
Perched on a wave of dim remembrance;
Raving with spittle, the sea screams 
And cries, sparing no boat 
In this black, black bay,
Where my ghost's ship glides 
Past the precipice of time,
Till day finally snuffs itself out in the abyss
And leaves night to linger on forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 19, 2018 at 3:23 PM
I like this poem. It reminds me of Allen Ginsberg's "Howl" without the allusions to modernity. I especially like the transition to "without a boat", but there are many interesting transitions in general sentence structure to little odd details. I also like the images like the "lice infested" beards. Great poem!
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