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At Peace

gentleness caressed
          as night's still shadow ascends
               restful transcendence


     03/07/2017

nightpeacehaiku

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Winged Warrior

June 19, 2017 at 10:29 AM

Hey! Mr. Haiku man...nice...^WW^

John Michaels

April 16, 2017 at 7:14 AM

Lovely Haiku, Charlie. Serene and thought-provoking. Well done. Regards, John.

Charlie Smith

April 16, 2017 at 7:41 AM

Thank you John...

Vladislav Raven

March 18, 2017 at 9:03 PM

Hi Charlie, i had to drop in on this Haiku and i am so glad i did. You bring to life a most wonderful moment. This Haiku sings in the soul. An excellent write Charlie. This has to be a seven and a fave, Your Friend....Mike.

Charlie Smith

March 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM

I'm so glad you shared it with me Mike, thank you...

Lynn Marie

March 15, 2017 at 5:19 PM

...so sought after... a lovely moment to experience. ..thank you :-) blessings, lynn

Charlie Smith

March 16, 2017 at 3:16 PM

Thank You Lynn Marie...

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2017 at 3:21 PM

Lovely and I like the alliteration and the sound of the last line rhyming with the second.

Charlie Smith

March 14, 2017 at 8:19 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Paul Callus

March 11, 2017 at 2:16 PM

Well done, Charlie...you manage to transmit the beauty of peace and serenity! Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

March 13, 2017 at 2:45 PM

Thank you Paul...

Lisa Ricci

March 8, 2017 at 1:08 PM

Hello Charlie. I bow to the perfection of your entry and its execution of the haiku format. It is true to the count not to mention the voice and tone. The moment in time is magnificent. You expressed beautiful imagery. Well done

Charlie Smith

March 8, 2017 at 3:06 PM

You are so kind Lisa, thank you...