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gentleness caressed as night's still shadow ascends restful transcendence 03/07/2017

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Winged Warrior

Date: 6/19/2017 10:29:00 AM

Hey! Mr. Haiku man...nice...^WW^

John Michaels

Date: 4/16/2017 7:14:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Charlie. Serene and thought-provoking. Well done. Regards, John.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2017 7:41:00 AM

Thank you John...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/18/2017 9:03:00 PM

Hi Charlie, i had to drop in on this Haiku and i am so glad i did. You bring to life a most wonderful moment. This Haiku sings in the soul. An excellent write Charlie. This has to be a seven and a fave, Your Friend....Mike.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/19/2017 9:26:00 AM

I'm so glad you shared it with me Mike, thank you...

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/15/2017 5:19:00 PM

...so sought after... a lovely moment to experience. ..thank you :-) blessings, lynn

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2017 3:16:00 PM

Thank You Lynn Marie...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2017 3:21:00 PM

Lovely and I like the alliteration and the sound of the last line rhyming with the second.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/14/2017 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2017 2:16:00 PM

Well done, Charlie...you manage to transmit the beauty of peace and serenity! Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/13/2017 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Paul...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/8/2017 1:08:00 PM

Hello Charlie. I bow to the perfection of your entry and its execution of the haiku format. It is true to the count not to mention the voice and tone. The moment in time is magnificent. You expressed beautiful imagery. Well done

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 3:06:00 PM

You are so kind Lisa, thank you...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 3:25:00 AM

- A beautiful haiku, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/8/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise...

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/7/2017 6:40:00 PM

I audibly sighed contentedly when I read this.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/7/2017 8:59:00 PM

Mission accomplished, thank you Sunlite...