at my age

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at my age, one does not run,
We walk and think,
We invent rondeaux,
In the river, every day, we drown,
at my age, one does not run,

Girls are mirages,
who disappear into the desert,
to whom should we offer another glass?

We no longer believe in much,
That in the beauty of roses,
to whom should we offer another glass?
We walk and think,
at my age, one does not run,


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I wrote some mischief,
Excuse me, friends,
I could have done better,
Kissing the sweet Jennifer,
Excuse me, friends.

The rondeaux are my friends,
Whether they are gay or cursed,
Excuse me friends,

I should have seen Lapland,
With Julie or Aunt Mélanie,
I could have done better,
Cross the great desert,
I wrote some mischief.
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Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 3:10 PM
Some of these lines were so cool. The older we are, the more we can relate. Love " in the river every day we drown"
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:52 PM
andrea, you comment is so nice, bring me a tear, thank you so much
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December 17, 2025 at 1:54 PM
24,25 ? It puts me at a loss those are running ages.
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:54 PM
opps, no mistake John, just numeration on my computer take care
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Interesting lines penned. I had forgotten about this form. I will have to look it up and try one once again. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:53 PM
thanks sara for supporting me, wishes to read you more
Buhagiar Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 1:43 AM
Thanks for reading my poem. Pity I see no new poem from you today.
Rolland Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:50 PM
thank you so much, victor, i can explain something true, getting old, my brain become clumsy in English and i have to do more efforts everyday, to write and comment in English, i must take time between poems intervention, wish me courage and luck take care poet
Hind Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Congrats though belated, on POTD!!
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:38 PM
thanks a lot Paige, for supporting
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Back with congrats on POTD, Yann!
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:39 PM
thanks Kim, for supporting
George Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 9:42 PM
Your mischief has earned for you a POTD honor. Congratulations dear Yaan. This has brought a smile to me.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:39 PM
thanks valsa, now i smile too, congrats
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Admirable for its contemplative and melancholic tone regarding aging and the passage of time. A personification, like friends, who offer companionship and an escape from life, feels somewhat wasted...with my compliments on your poem of the day.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:40 PM
walking and thinking is now all i need, thanks for supporting
Kitchin Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Yann, a belated congratulations on POTD, well penned.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:41 PM
thanks tania for supporting sincerely wishes
Delegans Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Congrats on POTD!
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:41 PM
thanks a lot Christopher, will commenting you next
Maverick Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations on potd Yann..' A Thought proking write.'
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:42 PM
thanks Joe
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December 11, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Hello Yann, congratulations on your beautiful poem being featured as POTD. Beautifully written. Have a wonderful day, my poet friend.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:43 PM
congratulating you too, thanks for supporting
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 11:32 AM
Wow. POTD. Congrats
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:43 PM
thanks Andrea , appreciated you support
Nicole Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 11:16 AM
' I wrote some mischief ' In truth, this can happen at any age. Congratulations Yann, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:44 PM
best wishes Nicol, thanks
Buhagiar Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Congrats on your POTD.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:44 PM
thanks Victor
Rodgers Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Hello Yann, Congrats on your POTD for it is a fantastic, poignant snapshot of maturing perspective. The "Excuse me, friends" section is particularly charming, what a gentle, humorous look back at the mischief and the missed opportunities (like Lapland) that are now simply stories Keep inventing those rondeaux. Autumn Blessings, Yann, Daniel
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:46 PM
dear Daniel, your comment touched my heart, thanks for supporting and kindness
Wolf Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Yann, You could not have done better than this poem!! Congratulations on POTD! Smell those roses! ~ Gershon
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:45 PM
thanks you so much, gershon, for your precious words, and supporting
Goldsmith Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Win. Have a Blessed Day with your Win..............
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:47 PM
thanks a lot Paula, will comment you very soon
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December 11, 2025 at 5:33 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:48 PM
thanks Sara, take care, always inspiring me
Seeker Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 3:21 AM
Body ages, heart remains young. A delightful poem, yann, so enjoyable and impish! Congratulations on POTD.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:49 PM
so glad to read you, poet, thanks for reading
Jones Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 2:33 AM
Congratulations on your potd for this engaging poem!
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:49 PM
thanks a lot Karen, will comment you soon
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December 11, 2025 at 2:17 AM
Congratulations Yann on having received poem of the day for your wonderful poem, an enjoyable read… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:57 PM
a great read with just the right touch of humor.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:50 PM
thanks Sara
Rose  Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Oh my how I love this one Yann, at my age I feel like a broken vessel at times, right now I needed to read this particular poem, my favorite line " That in the beauty of roses, I still believe in that.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:51 PM
comment touching my heart, thanks a lot Rose for inspiring me always
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 2:02 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Great poem, plenty of humor.
Rolland Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 9:51 PM
sharing pleasure dear poet, thanks for supporting
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