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At Last My Heart Sings

'Ere the sun sinks And thy love falls endless May this moment pause in beauty To ponder thy kisses My scarlet rose of love Betake my spirit truly As twilight falls gently At last my heart sings

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Date: 11/8/2024 4:09:00 PM
Twilight really is a time for contemplation, looking into the horizon, and letting the senses enjoy. I love the title which is repeated in the last line. The silence in the 1st stanza, culminating in a song in the 2nd stanza, though it may just be an "idea" of a song, creates a beautiful and powerful contrast. Thanks.
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