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death discarded shell free at last posted on April 28, 2018

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Date: 4/28/2018 12:10:00 PM
Awesome. I can feel the relief.
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Date: 4/28/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thanks, Dale. I wanted to draw the attention to the freedom of it.
Date: 4/28/2018 11:12:00 AM
not sure I wouldn't reverse top and bottom lines but either way, it makes an impact on the mind. Ponderous piece for six words.
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Date: 4/28/2018 2:09:00 PM
I see your point. Thanks for your visit and comment, Reason.

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