Seren Roberts Poet Ghazal

At Ease With Oneselves

They leap with gracefulness in the air.....at  ease with oneselves
The gazelles whose graciousness is there.....at ease with oneselves

So beautiful the plateaus where animals graze
Content in their surrounding, relaxed not a care .....at ease with oneselves

God looks kindly at the sight knowing all  is well
Grass is lush, trees at their best, great animal fare ....at ease with oneselves

Look, see the children yelling as they run and  play
A happy childhood, makes them adults who care .....at ease with oneselves

Home past the gazelles, who run and leap
Knowing  we mean no harm we are all there .....at ease with oneselve

Penned  October 11th 2013

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Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2015 at 4:13 PM SEREN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2013 at 2:34 PM Way to go with this winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Skat A November 15, 2013 at 11:05 AM Seren, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

Debbie Guzzi November 14, 2013 at 5:06 PM An interesting way to bring the tongue in cheek pun into the contest for the poetic Ghazal! As always a winner. Congrad's Light & Love

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 13, 2013 at 12:14 PM Seren, very lovely ghazal, like your end phrase, congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 12, 2013 at 2:56 AM Congratulations on the win, Seren

Sandra Adams November 11, 2013 at 7:33 PM You handed this form very well...nicely penned lovely poem...congrats on your win :)

Honestly J.T. October 14, 2013 at 2:15 AM Nice one and good luck in the contest Seren Roberts October 16, 2013 at 9:56 AM thank you for stopping by ...Seren

Harry Horsman October 13, 2013 at 5:08 PM wonderful Poetry Seren, as a calming effect... Seren Roberts October 13, 2013 at 11:05 PM Harry. Thnks for commenting....Seren

David Williams October 12, 2013 at 8:55 AM Seren you smoothy you, I like the format of this and the beauty in the image is terrific, well done and i will get around to finishing our affair ha ha...but not for good though....David xx Seren Roberts October 12, 2013 at 6:17 PM lol Breathe held til you return,thanks for stopping by...Seren

Monterey Sirak October 12, 2013 at 7:42 AM Simply beautiful. Seren Roberts October 12, 2013 at 6:18 PM Monterey I missed you, hope a;ll is ok. Thnks for comment ...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta October 11, 2013 at 11:18 PM Very soothing and graceful Ghazal, Seren Seren Roberts October 11, 2013 at 11:54 PM Thanks Ram, cant say I enjoyed writing in this form....Seren

Russell Sivey October 11, 2013 at 9:50 PM Wow, Seren, you do write quite masterfully and with so many different forms! It's nice to see you try these kinds of forms, I think I've tried this form maybe once in my life...I didn't like it and it wasn't anywhere close to the mastery at which you have crafted here my friend! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!! Seren Roberts October 11, 2013 at 11:53 PM Lol its been a pain in tne butt....Seren

Dan Kearley October 11, 2013 at 4:05 PM This is very nice Seren... Very graceful. :o) Seren Roberts October 11, 2013 at 4:22 PM Hi Dan did u sort things my friend...Seren

Jack Horne October 11, 2013 at 2:59 PM love this and what a fun form - must try it Seren Roberts October 11, 2013 at 4:20 PM hmmm fun form made me swear lol ...Seren