At a Quaker Meeting

Shaking out raincoats and umbrellas,
we file into the perfumed hall.
Plush peonies are everywhere,
they strain toward us in super-sized bunches,
hang from shelves and sills,
loll over low shelves.

The Quakers sit and fall silent,
comfortable hearts bumping into the unknown,
as they meditate.
My own distracted thoughts 
leave damp footprints on walls and ceiling,
as I listen to a radio blasting in my head.

Too wired, I imagine the peonies;
their spongy blooms soaking up 
my leaky mind.
I fancy I hear growls of censure
as the flowers shake their chunky heads
like wet dogs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 2:06 AM
Eric, your way with words is delightful!
Ashford Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 11:17 AM
Grins -thanks Caren!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 9:23 PM
I like the contrast in this one.
Ashford Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Cheers Richard.
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November 29, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Cheers Richard.
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