At a Lake In Winter

In the nacre of morning light
ice tendrils over cobbled stones
touching lake's edge
as surrounding crags plummet
to the surface.

An opaque sky preens
diaphanous plumage 
as I, like Narcissus,
ponder my reflection
in winter's adumbral waters.

My face flickers on the silent depths
like a mirage, an anomaly 
of flesh and bone
in isolated wilderness.
I drop a pebble; the image scatters 
as though blown away by arctic wind.

Soon encroaching cold 
will obscure the lake with a sheet
of luminous crystal;
I'll be gone by then
like an alpine gust of summer
that appeared suddenly
through the spruce flocking 
to a frozen oasis
below desolate summits.

12/16/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 9:15 PM
A breathtaking portrait if one of the most beautiful lakes in America Dale. Outstanding! Congratulations on your wondrful second place win! : ) xxoo
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January 24, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Roper Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 3:27 PM
Dale, you have created great imagery and feeling on your well written poem. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
Cozart Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. It was my pleasure.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:56 PM
I just adore the way you write free verse. Very few do I say that too. LOVE this.
Cozart Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea.
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December 16, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Man does seem out of place in the wilderness, but if you hadn't visited this awesome sight, how would you be able to describe things as beautifully as "ice tendrils over cobbled stones." Can't help but wish to skate on that lake's "luminous crystal." Absolutely stunning, Dale. I'm a new fan. ice tendrils over cobbled stones
Cozart Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn.
Leiser Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Great dichotomy in this fascinating poem, Gregory! Enjoyed :)
Cozart Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thank you, Laura.
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