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At a Glance

Oh to be able
just to touch your wondrous smile,
dwell in benign eyes
those yielding meadows of green
that sparkles in sun lit dew.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2020 5:36:00 PM

ahhh, here is one I faved. Precious still.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 10/11/2013 12:27:00 AM

Hi deary Harry how are you... hoping everything is well ...your poem is so beautiful,,, thank you so much for sharing.. :) Sk

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2013 5:48:00 PM

Oh this is such a beauty......wow !!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/25/2013 10:19:00 AM

You are so good at these tanka Harry and so beautiful this is..

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/25/2013 12:28:00 AM

This is very nice. A few words can say so much. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 9/24/2013 10:19:00 AM

Great Tanka Harry, thanks for your encouraging words on my write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2013 5:41:00 PM

Back here at this lovely poem just to say HELLO, my friend!!

Kash Poet

Date: 9/23/2013 11:57:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka by you Harry,Loved it.Thanks for your inspiring words at my poem.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2013 3:37:00 PM

lovely tanka indeed, my friend

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/22/2013 1:24:00 AM

Excellent. Nice write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2013 1:07:00 AM

I love this one, Harry and I'm faving it just because I love good poems on green eyes!!

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/19/2013 3:08:00 PM

This impressed the hell of of me my friend! This one shines... cheers, Jack

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/19/2013 2:51:00 PM

Beautifully written... Thanks for the visit, too. Always enjoy your work.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2013 11:59:00 AM

a feast for the senses, harry... this piece reels like a sweet trance.. much enjoyed!..:) huggs

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2013 8:49:00 AM

beautiful tanka Harry...well penned....thanks for your kind words

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/18/2013 9:40:00 PM

I am watching your lines like a beautiful painting, where one would like to get lost in the benign eyes amid the meadows of green. Great painting my friend leaving us astonished with this beauty of yours. Love and best wishes..Ravindra