At 3am

In the still of night, the current heightens,
waking us gently, from our deep slumber,
when, one with the void, our body lightens,
tingling with hum of the silent thunder,
vivifying form in blissful rapture.

No doing done; we are a receptor,
as magnetism ignites in-form vectors,
benediction of bliss continuum,
divine entwinement, the surprise factor,
each node within us, our sensorium.

05-January-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rose  Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 12:23 PM
I really enjoyed your dizain, I am new to this form, I would like to write one May I run it by you to see if correct.
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January 9, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Hello Mystic Rose Rose! Certainly, you can! I too picked up all rule based formats here on PS only by reading definitions, examples and through hit and trial.
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