Asylum

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*Image of American Horror Story Asylum by Giphy. Asylum A warning smile occasions expressions, as an empty room indulge blank faces, a sun divulges unannounced to stares, as closed night eliminates stargazers. As closed night eliminates stargazers, a sun divulges unannounced to stares, as an empty room indulge blank faces, a warning smile occasions expressions. 2020 August 09

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2020 1:22:00 PM

Very atmospheric and the picture goes great with it too,William. WAsn't one of the American Horror Story seasons called Asylum? Scary one!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2020 1:33:00 PM

Well noted, Andrea, and I watched 2 shows of that years ago--can't remember them now, oh well--thanks again, Aloha! William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/9/2020 9:09:00 PM

This speaks to the darkness of fear and uncertainty, very evocative, best wishes in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/9/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle, for your insightful sharing and encouragement, Aloha! William