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a sun sent heat growth comes gently warnings of warmth hardly noticed not by any act of man but all natural she prepares metamorphosis in quiet like poorly dubbed Godzilla films watching an eight minute delay with a red shift she swallows those around bounding great grasshoppers man leaps away home worlds made for those left alive searches for second suns are vain it requires too much for survival a trip far too distant with ships too slow our system becomes desolate as our mother cools down we thin with hope man may attempt growing grasses but we are simply planting astroturf the most unforgiving winter will freeze remaining humankind just as she gave us life she takes it back her layers spread as dissipating smoke only a gaseous ghost will stand man is forgotten in the fog all hope will lie in shots out in the dark technologic prayers sent out too the deaf out in the hollows are spacemen left watering the astroturf

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Date: 10/15/2010 12:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today.. hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members on site.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:22:00 AM
Very interesting and creative write on Astroturf. enjoyed it and welcome to the poetry soup, Kenneth
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:03:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kenneth. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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