Astronomical Aggravations

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(NOTE: This is derived from some recent science-related headlines & mixed-up for a surreal--& perhaps humorous--effect)

Two Empire State Buildings fly by Earth
Phobos will crash into Earth on Mars Day
Careless Martians created our universe in Pluto's lab
Pluto walks a tightrope over underestimated solar flares

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Sand Blown

Date: 4/27/2022 10:19:00 AM

....'ehhhh! what's up doc?....illusions like that go to show no two minds cartoon their realities in exactly the same way..... andt, most of it's probably meant to be as meta-for some other idea......stan sand