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Astronautic Dream

From the nest of newness and modern discovery Materials that proclaim a new technology It is only diamond, now nano-thin, beyond fire's Wrath, and winter's whisper of cold desire The thing nothing can change or destroy, at last A turtle dome equipped that into space will blast Dilated at rest, infinitesimal in motion's swift Transition without resistance, or drag, the lift Spontaneous reaction from each part to part And I the hologram ... captain and console chart Ready to cross the wormhole of galaxies, light Like a static comet, and time eclipsed with delight Did ever Ezekiel saw such a beast, or dream wake Upon bright Da Vinci's brain, or NASA's genius make Such craft so self contained, a city without man Where loneliness ends before its thought began For only holograms are carried there into space To chart the new frontier of the human race And we beholding ourselves in glory, by beholding Change, and meet and merge the singular becoming Through the spiral back before time began or space Did all our memory of eternity so inefficiently erased Each diamond quark a colony of self supporting strings The little ship of light that man's immortality brings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2010 7:55:00 AM
Exceptional write, well deserved First Place win,L'nass!! How did I miss this??? Of course, this is no surprise as always you deliver!! Peace. Please read, when you have the time "More than a Dream". Peace, your friend, Audrey
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:41:00 AM
GREAT writing! A big congrats to you ( finally trying to get around to some of the older contest resultes). This line was stunning: a city without man Where loneliness ends Luv,Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:13:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congratulations on the win. I enjoyed the poem a great deal and wish you the best.
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Date: 1/22/2010 3:52:00 PM
Brillant write here L'nass ... love the "turtle dome" ... smile ... Congratulations on your first place win in Matt's contest!!
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:41:00 PM
congrats on the big win!!
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Date: 1/21/2010 10:59:00 AM
Truly deserving of a first-place honor, Shango! Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2010 8:36:00 AM
This poem was superb and untouchable by all the others, L'nass! You were the winner, by all means!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/21/2010 5:36:00 AM
This is excellent L'nass! Exactly what the contest called for and you filled the bill to a quark! congratulations on your well deserved win. Robert
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:37:00 AM
Congrats L'nass on your first place win in Matt's spaceship contest.. incredible write and well deserved win... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/21/2010 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations Charma, on your 1st place in Matt Calari’s “How to Build a Spaceship” contest with this imaginative poem. Super, as always. Your creative skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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