Astronautic Dream

From the nest of newness and modern discovery
Materials that proclaim a new technology
It is only diamond, now nano-thin, beyond fire's
Wrath, and winter's whisper of cold desire
The thing nothing can change or destroy, at last
A turtle dome equipped that into space will blast

Dilated at rest, infinitesimal in motion's swift
Transition without resistance, or drag, the lift
Spontaneous reaction from each part to part
And I the hologram ... captain and console chart
Ready to cross the wormhole of galaxies, light
Like a static comet, and time eclipsed with delight

Did ever Ezekiel saw such a beast, or dream wake
Upon bright Da Vinci's brain, or NASA's genius make
Such craft so self contained, a city without man
Where loneliness ends before its thought began
For only holograms are carried there into space
To chart the new frontier of the human race

And we beholding ourselves in glory, by beholding
Change, and meet and merge the singular becoming
Through the spiral back before time began or space
Did all our memory of eternity so inefficiently erased
Each diamond quark a colony of self supporting strings
The little ship of light that man's immortality brings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/18/2010 7:55:00 AM
Exceptional write, well deserved First Place win,L'nass!! How did I miss this??? Of course, this is no surprise as always you deliver!! Peace. Please read, when you have the time "More than a Dream". Peace, your friend, Audrey
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:41:00 AM
GREAT writing! A big congrats to you ( finally trying to get around to some of the older contest resultes). This line was stunning: a city without man Where loneliness ends Luv,Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:13:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congratulations on the win. I enjoyed the poem a great deal and wish you the best.
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Date: 1/22/2010 3:52:00 PM
Brillant write here L'nass ... love the "turtle dome" ... smile ... Congratulations on your first place win in Matt's contest!!
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:41:00 PM
congrats on the big win!!
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Date: 1/21/2010 10:59:00 AM
Truly deserving of a first-place honor, Shango! Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2010 8:36:00 AM
This poem was superb and untouchable by all the others, L'nass! You were the winner, by all means!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/21/2010 5:36:00 AM
This is excellent L'nass! Exactly what the contest called for and you filled the bill to a quark! congratulations on your well deserved win. Robert
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:37:00 AM
Congrats L'nass on your first place win in Matt's spaceship contest.. incredible write and well deserved win... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/21/2010 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations Charma, on your 1st place in Matt Calari’s “How to Build a Spaceship” contest with this imaginative poem. Super, as always. Your creative skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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