Notes About The Poem

Astigmatism

The curvature of the eye, 
marred by irregularity, distorts.

Rain falling through the aqueous orb
of eye or earth prisms, 
propelling points of light skyward, 
producing rainbows.

Sunlight following by the curve
curls rising ever skyward
from the steaming surface
of earth and sea to joining
on the wind.

The curvature of the eye 
marred by irregularity distorts.

The child looks out and up
into the parental face, through the lashes
of this imperfect form and settles, smiling.
knowing no norm, only accepting the is.

The adult: cut, crisp, dried, and molded,
cries; mourning the loss of perfection
denying the value of imperfection
with a stubbornness born of naming.

Name nothing, for in not naming, 
the eye can accept all things as beautiful.


First Published in Dual Coast Magazine Issue 1 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:52 PM
So very true, indeed.
Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Oh Debbie you are right inside of my world here, having had lots of eye problems and surgery,,your poetry suggests you may have had also,,,but i must admit,, some of my visions created i see here in your wonderful poetry....but only you could paint in words the imagery of it all....
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 10:53 AM
awww thank you Harry yes I have floaters, astigmatism [how similiar to the word stigmata aye?] and now cataracts which really give a star ship enterprise going to warp speed view at night LOL
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 10:24 AM
The poem flows and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness. Emile.
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January 20, 2015 at 10:19 AM
I love your perspective... what most consider to be a flaw, a child considers beauty...you could write about cold, runny eggs and make them sound appealing! Debbie...hugs, Rhonda
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