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The curvature of the eye, marred by irregularity, distorts. Rain falling through the aqueous orb of eye or earth prisms, propelling points of light skyward, producing rainbows. Sunlight following by the curve curls rising ever skyward from the steaming surface of earth and sea to joining on the wind. The curvature of the eye marred by irregularity distorts. The child looks out and up into the parental face, through the lashes of this imperfect form and settles, smiling. knowing no norm, only accepting the is. The adult: cut, crisp, dried, and molded, cries; mourning the loss of perfection denying the value of imperfection with a stubbornness born of naming. Name nothing, for in not naming, the eye can accept all things as beautiful. First Published in Dual Coast Magazine Issue 1 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/20/2015 1:52:00 PM
So very true, indeed.
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:36:00 AM
Oh Debbie you are right inside of my world here, having had lots of eye problems and surgery,,your poetry suggests you may have had also,,,but i must admit,, some of my visions created i see here in your wonderful poetry....but only you could paint in words the imagery of it all....
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/20/2015 10:53:00 AM
awww thank you Harry yes I have floaters, astigmatism [how similiar to the word stigmata aye?] and now cataracts which really give a star ship enterprise going to warp speed view at night LOL
Date: 1/20/2015 10:24:00 AM
The poem flows and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness. Emile.
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:19:00 AM
I love your perspective... what most consider to be a flaw, a child considers beauty...you could write about cold, runny eggs and make them sound appealing! Debbie...hugs, Rhonda
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