Aster Avenue

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avenue of hues but mostly asters rich blooms colored by the sun petals on pathways in windswept honeyed summer on the outside in tireless mauve hours pause just to hear cardinals sing giddy joy in blooms backwards and forwards admiring feet are marching wild dreamy summer

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/29/2023 11:53:00 AM

Lovely work!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/29/2023 2:08:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/27/2023 6:03:00 AM

I’m giddy in your avenue of hues! Ahh…

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/27/2023 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim. ;)

Bill Baker

Date: 6/26/2023 4:56:00 PM

Lovely imagery in your fine Haikus, Evelyn. The photo was a good match for the smooth flowing words of your poetry. Thanks for sharing your gift with us my friend. Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2023 10:22:00 PM

Many thanks for the great pleasure of your comment, Bill. I hope your week is wonderful, Evelyn :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2023 6:33:00 AM

A delightful avenue it is. Much enjoyed the imagery and pleasant voice of your poem, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2023 9:42:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of esteem, Vijay.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2023 10:58:00 PM

Dear Evelyn, I admire your haikus very much. Great imagery and color.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2023 9:40:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Your words are inspiration.