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asprodite

“asprodite”


we
could
never see
eye to eye for i
not only being taller
than you am in
some ways
blind


love is like 

that and that

is like love


hardly hard
but still stone
petrified to 
be alone 
yet all
very
so
a

lone

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James Peranteau Date: 12/16/2023 12:14:00 AM you are the quintessential writer here jeff...Oh; Don't put your title in the text page for your write, it's posted in the box above where you post your write...i told ya, i stop in on writers here...u questioned mine enthusiastic with regard the poets here...i enjoy immensely discovering the astute, likewise growing future astute writers, especially here on "Poetry Soup"! james Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 12/4/2023 10:12:00 PM Very creative with both thoughts and shaping of the poem, Jeff. I like it! Have a great week, my friend. Bill Login to Reply Jeff Connelly Date: 12/5/2023 4:58:00 AM Thanks Bill. You too

Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/30/2023 5:10:00 PM Jeff, this is something I have to study. I mean, the poem is awesome. The meaning, I have to interpretate it. You mean, about love through internet?. Better, don't.. Sometimes, it's better to be alone than being with bad stòries. Have a nice evening Jeff Login to Reply Jeff Connelly Date: 12/1/2023 4:30:00 AM I love your interpretation, Maria. Thanks so much for reading and making me think