Aspiring Love Blossoms

Smiling mirthfully, relishing amber twilit theme,
Bedazzled in musings, reveling memories agleam,
Oh! how you charm, gazing eve’s blushing arc,
Where scarlet hues delight, igniting love spark
When impulses, moonlit, passions playful cajole
As we stroll daydreaming trekking verdant knoll,
Ambling in romance, two sensuous souls extol;

Just after the setting sun merges with the sea
And sky above stages a concert of stellar glee
When seductive vibes on wings of zest spree
Questing for, stealthily, doting hearts’ consent
Chasing exaltation, love-struck hints augment,
Exuding scent amatory from emboldened heart
Intoxicating affection smitten feelings impart;

Clasping amorous moment together we found,
Where tick of blazing hearts is the only sound
But for the clues tiptoeing, arousing carnal bliss,
Pinging fervent longings yearning endearing kiss,
Enchanting intentions of eager, flirtatious night
Courting your approval, ecstatic reveries ignite,
Sowing dreams euphoric to bloom in fertile dawn
Aspiring love evermore, blossoming on and on.

July 30, 2022
Placed 1st: Rhyme Rumi Quote Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
(151 words)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buehler Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Delightfully romantic and exquisitely lovely. A fave for me. Belated congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:48 PM
At last I see it with the win. Big congratulations, Vijay
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 3:45 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on this place of honor. Sara
La France Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:09 PM
Vijay, a beautifully penned poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in the contest ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Yes, "Aspiring love evermore, blossoming on and on." Have a great/blessed day.......................
Brul Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Majestic rendition of sublime feelings. Masterfully done! A fave for me. Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 11:25 PM
Dear Vijay, I am so pleased to see this beautiful poem win First Place. I just knew it would place high. Congratulations my friend! You already know how much I enjoyed it. Blessings xxoo
Tor Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 7:59 PM
The images you paint in the readers mind Vijay are vivid and enchanting in love and romance. Wonderfully written and expressed, my friend. Ejoyed so much reading. You are the master at these...
Mcconnell Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Such a lovely romantic piece Vijay , excellently penned with great imagery and beautiful rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon
La France Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Vijay, your poem is so lovely, and romantic, best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance
Cunningham Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 11:35 AM
You are indeed the master of romantic verse Vijay. stunning imagery as is your trademark. Best of luck and enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Baker Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Runi would like this poem, Vijay. A FAV for me to add to my list. Excellent entry. Good luck in the contest my friend. Your adjective and descriptions are exquisite. The read flows as the love grows. Have a great week! BB
Fowler Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Enchanting Vijay. Sweet and romantic. :) Linda
Roper Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 6:47 AM
The artist of the verse has made a jewel .. good luck in the contest. Blessings my friend.
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:34 AM
So very kind of you Eve. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Horsman Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 1:59 AM
Oh this is so good, Vijay, your last line, says it all about your poetry, and so may it be.
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
May Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:03 PM
The sky puts on a show as love ignites the passion, Wonderful write Vijay
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. You have aptly described some beauty and romance in this one. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Much appreciate Sara--many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 5:25 PM
Great job, Vijay. Am I mistaking something? I recall someone had a contest that allowed for less words than this one. Maybe it was a different contest.
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:32 AM
This had a 200 word limit. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Andrea. Many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Vijay, you have penned a lovely, romantic, vividly descriptive piece. Janice
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Janice. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 2:49 PM
Each stanza stands alone and together, following each other like a rare pearl, clasped together, nicely done, gl in the contest Vijay , though I don't think you need it, it speaks for itself. :)
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Thanks again, Vienna.
Nicole Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:53 PM
"Bedazzled in musings, just after the setting sun merges with the sea." Both thoughts leave me breathless. You paint such beautiful images with your words. This is so soft, sensual and romantic. You have created a masterpiece, Vijay. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Always a joy when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many thanks.
Tor Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Vijay referencing Nature to romantic moments is cleverly done here. Your imagination is amazing to do that. It is easy when you read it but to create it is highly difficult, I applaud your effort my friend. Your entry I am sure will be like everything you write, that is a winning entry. We will see. Thank you for sharing...
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:30 AM
So very kind of you Michael. Much appreciate you taking the time to write detailed remarks. many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:51 PM
When you write like this even the flowers in the garden bloom, nice one Vijay,
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Salehi Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 4:10 PM
Dear Vijay... like always is eloquently written.
Pandit Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Pashang--much appreciate.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 1:16 PM
Vijay, Your winsome way of combining nature’s beauty with the beauty of love blossoming is breath taking. The entire world seems to have a rose colored hue when smitten by the melding of two hearts. I am sure this romantic entry will garner a top win for you in the contest my friend. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
Pandit Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Your comments are as delightful as your poems, Connie. Much appreciate your visit and value your feedback. Many thanks.
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