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Aspiring Love Blossoms

Smiling mirthfully, relishing amber twilit theme, Bedazzled in musings, reveling memories agleam, Oh! how you charm, gazing eve’s blushing arc, Where scarlet hues delight, igniting love spark When impulses, moonlit, passions playful cajole As we stroll daydreaming trekking verdant knoll, Ambling in romance, two sensuous souls extol; Just after the setting sun merges with the sea And sky above stages a concert of stellar glee When seductive vibes on wings of zest spree Questing for, stealthily, doting hearts’ consent Chasing exaltation, love-struck hints augment, Exuding scent amatory from emboldened heart Intoxicating affection smitten feelings impart; Clasping amorous moment together we found, Where tick of blazing hearts is the only sound But for the clues tiptoeing, arousing carnal bliss, Pinging fervent longings yearning endearing kiss, Enchanting intentions of eager, flirtatious night Courting your approval, ecstatic reveries ignite, Sowing dreams euphoric to bloom in fertile dawn Aspiring love evermore, blossoming on and on. July 30, 2022 Placed 1st: Rhyme Rumi Quote Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet (151 words)

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/22/2023 6:16:00 PM

Delightfully romantic and exquisitely lovely. A fave for me. Belated congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:48:00 PM

At last I see it with the win. Big congratulations, Vijay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2022 3:45:00 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on this place of honor. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 2:09:00 PM

Vijay, a beautifully penned poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in the contest ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2022 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Yes, "Aspiring love evermore, blossoming on and on." Have a great/blessed day.......................

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/13/2022 8:22:00 AM

Majestic rendition of sublime feelings. Masterfully done! A fave for me. Congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 11:25:00 PM

Dear Vijay, I am so pleased to see this beautiful poem win First Place. I just knew it would place high. Congratulations my friend! You already know how much I enjoyed it. Blessings xxoo

Michael Tor

Date: 8/9/2022 7:59:00 PM

The images you paint in the readers mind Vijay are vivid and enchanting in love and romance. Wonderfully written and expressed, my friend. Ejoyed so much reading. You are the master at these...

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/9/2022 4:25:00 PM

Such a lovely romantic piece Vijay , excellently penned with great imagery and beautiful rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon

Constance La France

Date: 8/7/2022 2:30:00 PM

Vijay, your poem is so lovely, and romantic, best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/7/2022 11:35:00 AM

You are indeed the master of romantic verse Vijay. stunning imagery as is your trademark. Best of luck and enjoy your week ahead. Tom

Bill Baker

Date: 8/7/2022 9:25:00 AM

Runi would like this poem, Vijay. A FAV for me to add to my list. Excellent entry. Good luck in the contest my friend. Your adjective and descriptions are exquisite. The read flows as the love grows. Have a great week! BB

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/6/2022 2:53:00 PM

Enchanting Vijay. Sweet and romantic. :) Linda

Eve Roper

Date: 8/6/2022 6:47:00 AM

The artist of the verse has made a jewel .. good luck in the contest. Blessings my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:34:00 AM

So very kind of you Eve. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/5/2022 1:59:00 AM

Oh this is so good, Vijay, your last line, says it all about your poetry, and so may it be.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:33:00 AM

Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2022 6:03:00 PM

The sky puts on a show as love ignites the passion, Wonderful write Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:33:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2022 8:50:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. You have aptly described some beauty and romance in this one. Way to go. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:33:00 AM

Much appreciate Sara--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2022 5:25:00 PM

Great job, Vijay. Am I mistaking something? I recall someone had a contest that allowed for less words than this one. Maybe it was a different contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:32:00 AM

This had a 200 word limit. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Andrea. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/3/2022 6:58:00 AM

Vijay, you have penned a lovely, romantic, vividly descriptive piece. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:32:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Janice. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/2/2022 2:49:00 PM

Each stanza stands alone and together, following each other like a rare pearl, clasped together, nicely done, gl in the contest Vijay , though I don't think you need it, it speaks for itself. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:31:00 AM

Thanks again, Vienna.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/31/2022 7:53:00 PM

"Bedazzled in musings, just after the setting sun merges with the sea." Both thoughts leave me breathless. You paint such beautiful images with your words. This is so soft, sensual and romantic. You have created a masterpiece, Vijay. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:31:00 AM

Always a joy when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many thanks.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/31/2022 7:17:00 PM

Vijay referencing Nature to romantic moments is cleverly done here. Your imagination is amazing to do that. It is easy when you read it but to create it is highly difficult, I applaud your effort my friend. Your entry I am sure will be like everything you write, that is a winning entry. We will see. Thank you for sharing...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:30:00 AM

So very kind of you Michael. Much appreciate you taking the time to write detailed remarks. many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/31/2022 6:51:00 PM

When you write like this even the flowers in the garden bloom, nice one Vijay,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/31/2022 4:10:00 PM

Dear Vijay... like always is eloquently written.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Pashang--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/31/2022 1:16:00 PM

Vijay, Your winsome way of combining nature’s beauty with the beauty of love blossoming is breath taking. The entire world seems to have a rose colored hue when smitten by the melding of two hearts. I am sure this romantic entry will garner a top win for you in the contest my friend. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2022 1:23:00 PM

Your comments are as delightful as your poems, Connie. Much appreciate your visit and value your feedback. Many thanks.