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Nine beautiful lines contest Sponsored by Constance LA France
" My mother wanted me to be her wings, to fly as she was unable to. I love the fact that she wanted to give birth to her own wings. " -Erica Jong
Oh, your countenance in dawns graceful light offers the imagination a lofty throne an angel? goddess? not meant for human sight yet, you are here beside me, alone like rich, translucent cream with a ripe, fuzzy peach Your face enticing my hands to reach to gently brush shiny locks of hair away putting every aspect of your beauty and grace on display How long will I be allowed to behold my daughter this way?

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Date: 4/11/2025 7:55:00 AM
This is just so lovely Crystol, congratulations
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2025 9:04:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 4/9/2025 6:27:00 AM
Sweet, sweet, sweet Crystol. I feel you will always behold her that way. Congratulations! :)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2025 9:04:00 AM
I hope so ty! Xo
Date: 4/7/2025 12:19:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/story again. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2025 9:03:00 AM
Tysm!xo
Date: 4/7/2025 11:57:00 AM
- Lovely, time flies... enjoy the moment - congratulations on your win in the contest, Crystol :) - hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2025 9:03:00 AM
Ty!xo
Date: 4/7/2025 7:56:00 AM
The poem evokes a distinct sense of beauty, nuanced feelings, and imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Crystal
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2025 9:03:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 4/3/2025 12:33:00 PM
"Asleep next to me" is a lovely write/story. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/8/2025 9:03:00 AM
Ty! Xo

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