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Asleep

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/13/2010 10:12:00 PM
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HAHAAHA--FUNNY INDEED..PSSSSSSSSSSS..PSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS..PSSSSSSSSSSS--:)Charma
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/12/2010 9:19:00 PM
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hmmm, that will put folks to sleep if ya keep making lots and lots of lines like that. hahaha.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 3/12/2010 12:49:00 PM
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o-k Daniel! wake up!! lol ... a delight to read!! Peace, Audrey
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 3/12/2010 9:23:00 AM
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A fun read and alliteration too.. good job Daniel.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Susan Palli
Date: 3/12/2010 1:23:00 AM
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Ha ha ha
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