Ask Not

we must have forgotten... the pyramid's foundation, rotten. Physiological begets Safety. shadowing the State of coercion, states thee. opt-in by creation, opt-out, your expiration. tread on me and my countrymen. volition ours, to sunder friends? participated. regulated. complied. the time, overdue. ask not what your country can do for you.

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Kathy Bahr

Date: 1/3/2023 10:50:00 AM

that is a whopping bunch! to wake you. thank you for sharing your poem.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/17/2022 5:34:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

E. K. Belamar Benjamin

Date: 12/16/2022 5:35:00 PM

Hello there! I'm an aspiring science fiction writer. Always looking to improve my skills, I like to think of myself as "writing to learn, while learning to write." If you read any of my work and either love it or hate it, please don't hesitate to let me know. I'm open to any and all criticism! Looking forward to connecting with other writers and readers! -EKBB