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Ashes

The fire inside me has burned out There’s nothing left but a smouldering pile of ashes Barely enough heat to spark even an interest in life Funny that, now I’m finally free to live it The fuel, my hatred, is all but exhausted You died: the source. No more passion: it’s buried Relief brings tears. Neither of joy nor grief Emptiness flows through my dying soul No pain. No feeling. Only our ashes remain With no phoenix to rise from them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 10:49:00 PM
this is simply beautiful, truly and it is screaming your own emotions. im fav-in it! i really enjoyed this, sad but so beautiful, best of wishes and my love, madison --and thank you so much for the comments <3
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:50:00 PM
Never underestimate yourself. You have a lot more going for you than you can see. You search through those ashes and find just one spark. That's all it takes to set the world on fire. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 4/27/2009 6:11:00 PM
beautiful expression of exactly how it feels when we lose someone....great job!
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