Ashes

The fire inside me has burned out
There’s nothing left but a smouldering pile of ashes
Barely enough heat to spark even an interest in life
Funny that, now I’m finally free to live it

The fuel, my hatred, is all but exhausted
You died:  the source. No more passion: it’s buried
Relief brings tears.  Neither of joy nor grief
Emptiness flows through my dying soul
No pain.  No feeling.  
Only our ashes remain
With no phoenix to rise from them
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Thomer Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 10:49 PM
this is simply beautiful, truly and it is screaming your own emotions. im fav-in it! i really enjoyed this, sad but so beautiful, best of wishes and my love, madison --and thank you so much for the comments <3
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Never underestimate yourself. You have a lot more going for you than you can see. You search through those ashes and find just one spark. That's all it takes to set the world on fire. God Bless. Vince
Udeschini Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 6:11 PM
beautiful expression of exactly how it feels when we lose someone....great job!
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