The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

ash in the mouth


You speak of vows like broken tools,
iron bent, still hot in the hand;
seeing the feast tipped into a gutter,
and name each grain of choice.
 
Dogs sniff at what was once a meal,
grass bows away from the teeth.
The wind carries scents you do not forgive.
 
There is a field where promises rot-
fruit collapsing inward,
sweetness leaking into the soil.
 
Some walk there hungry, some in disgust,
all with shadows long behind them.
You throw stones at the well,
hearing no splash. I lean over,
and see only my own face, wavering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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