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Climbing the Nose route ... Perfect weather - feeling fresh! I should take the point ... Climbing partners are nervous So we'll go slow ... and steady Highest rock face in the world "On belay?", "Belay on ... climb!" ( Syllables counted @ HowManySyllables.com = 5,7,5,7,7,7,7 )

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/17/2019 5:22:00 AM

I'll just watch, okay? Well done. Let me know when we're going sky diving! Best of luck in the contest and all else - I enjoyed your Tanka. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 2:52:00 PM

LOL - will do, CayCay - bring your wing suit!! (And thank you so much!) :-) <3