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As We Grow Old and We So Slowly Fade

As We Grow Old And We So Slowly Fade As we grow old and we so slowly fade we should ponder, how we are wondrous made. Our brains are far more complex than we know we are given hearts and not just for show. Nature too, conspires to bring us along with bees and birds gifting honey and song. Consider blessings of Nature's flowers or its snow laden high mountain towers. Rejoice in treasures of vast blue skies sweetness in our dear mothers apple pies. Such rare gift as our yellow moon's soft rays soothing memories of our happy days. As we grow old and we so slowly fade we should ponder, how we are wondrous made. Our brains, are far more complex than we know we are given hearts and not just for show. Robert J. Lindley, 4-12-2017 Rhyme NOTE: Having now dared to live past 60, I find time to contemplate life, its mysterious, relationship to Nature and vagaries of Fate.. Especially Fate--that seems oft to be dark and vindictive in its renderings! Why so oft does the very old get the greater gift of understanding that is so necessary when one is young? Certainly so necessary if one is to avoid the many pitfalls of youth. Conclusion is-- those pitfalls are not meant to be avoided. As they serve to make the man/woman, be it for better or worse...... Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 Total # Syllables: 160 Total # Words: 126

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Date: 9/7/2017 7:46:00 PM
Hi Robert, I so enjoyed your excellent, thought-provoking poem and your poet's note as well. Your write was compelling in content and wonderful in its rhythm and rhyme. Outstanding! :)
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Date: 5/18/2017 7:47:00 AM
Awesome descriptive write Robert; our looks do fade but we should keep in mind that were all wondrously made! Enjoyed~Che :)
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Date: 4/16/2017 6:38:00 AM
So true Robert - beautiful piece. But as you mentioned we have to learn as youth - Pity though. I would have to rate this as a 7+
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Date: 4/15/2017 3:37:00 PM
Hi Robert, You have penned such a deep thought provoking write. Your title commanded my attention. I enjoy writes that make you ponder the complexities of life. Excellent job. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/15/2017 2:06:00 PM
Amen :) 7!
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Date: 4/15/2017 12:14:00 PM
Very wise sentiments wonderfully expressed Robert:) A thoughtful piece that brings home the meaning of 'the folly of youth'. If we knew then what we know now, I wonder if much 'risk' would be taken and how we would be without so many great inventions if not for the young throwing caution to the wind and taking chances we seem to not take as we age.Nature and philosophy are a most enjoyable read under your guidance. Terrific writing:) lynnxxx Enjoy a lovely Easter weekend Robert.
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