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As the Sun Goes Down

Just before the sun goes down She steps out of the trees, With her little one at her side, As pretty as you please. The doe and her fawn just stop by For a short nightly visit here, Then they amble off to the darkening wood, Till tomorrow when they'll reappear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2011 10:24:00 PM
Those deer will always pop up wherever they know they will receive a free handout. Those animals are smarter than most of the other ones in the forest. Good way to describe them here.
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:16:00 PM
Deer of any species are just so beautiful, so regal in stance like their King their Stag >> James :)
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Date: 11/11/2010 3:07:00 AM
great verse babe...... thanks for your support i am your 4 ever slave retract no sin retort:.....Don
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:31:00 PM
very beautiful picture you have painted.sweet work,Francine
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:15:00 PM
That can be a beautiful sight but also they can be so destructive..Enjoyed your work..Thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed my fun poem about the senior moment..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2010 11:38:00 AM
Francine, what a tranquil scene you have created here. Loved it ;)
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:38:00 PM
it is a concrete poem
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Date: 11/8/2010 2:21:00 PM
this is a peaceful image you penned here. there is a sort of quietness in your words. A good write and thanks for your comment.
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Date: 11/8/2010 1:59:00 PM
enjoyed reading today...
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:17:00 PM
a breath of fresh air, francine... so subtlely engaging! warmest,nette
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:44:00 AM
Wonderful image of the deer you have created, Francine
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:11:00 AM
It's like a blessing at the end of the day to see the deer as they "stop by," Francine. What a beautiful image you crafted in this poem. Very uplifting! Thank you. Love, Carolyn
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