As the Night Collects Your Debt

As the night collects your debt Find this the rotting door now thrust, creaking screams align the mire Loosened shadows coughing dust in a world now set afire Worry gathers in the mist, along a crooked staircase rise Nooses hang from rafter’s twist, portraits gaze through swollen eyes Smell the stench of fevers past, sweat does stream of wallowed reach Moors in line of wretched cast, lessons taught but not to teach Break this bread of mirrored shard, slurp your lime serrated drink Write as if a napkin bard, any thought with which you think Last, these days of sorted lanes, walking chains and lockets bore Weakness in your heart now claims of a time you lived before Stare the darkness now you keep, forcing out a sad regret You shall sow the fear you reap as the night collects your debt

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Date: 6/29/2017 9:35:00 AM
This is a spooky one Chris, and just before I turn in for sleep - it's night in my part of the world. My muse better not keep me awake...Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 9:40:00 AM
Ooops, I should have put a warning label on this one. :) Thanks so much Maria and I hope you have a great evening
Date: 6/29/2017 8:14:00 AM
"Walking chains and lockets bore" and "as the night collects your debt" indeed a creepy one! Well done, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim. I guess I have a creepy side as well. :)
Date: 6/29/2017 1:58:00 AM
Love this scary tale. I am glad though that I read it this morning, and not yesterday right before I went to sleep ;p
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:18:00 AM
That is a good thing. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 6/29/2017 12:43:00 AM
A dark write, though strangely I found it very soothingly rhythmic :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Jo. That is always what I shoot for when I write rhyming poetry. I hope for the reader to be taken away by the melody. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 6/28/2017 11:39:00 PM
Yes, I agree dark and chilling, kind of makes you think of evil, then at the end - I was thinking "I'm sure glad I sleep good at night" :) Well done Chris
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. Yep, a little evil and a little darkness escapes from me every now and then. :)
Date: 6/28/2017 9:37:00 PM
Wow is this one dark-I can hear Vincent Price's voice while reading it... :) So chilling, very good Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for saying so Sara, that is really cool to think about.
Date: 6/28/2017 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful, Chris. I mean, WAY.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Dale.
Date: 6/28/2017 6:34:00 PM
Hey, Chris, it's the 4th of July that's coming - not Hallowe'en!
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Date: 6/29/2017 8:15:00 AM
Oh yeah...thanks for reminding me. :) Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 6/28/2017 5:52:00 PM
ohh chris, the law of consequence bites!... a stirring piece that makes one examine his own conscience... huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 6/29/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so very much Nette. I appreciate your visit and kindness
Date: 6/28/2017 5:41:00 PM
I just love this Chris :)
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Date: 6/28/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary.
Date: 6/28/2017 5:40:00 PM
Wow that is a scary deep one Chris! You have the ability to write a wide range of writing. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/28/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, just thought I'd toss a dark one out there
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