As the Night Collects Your Debt

As the night collects your debt Find this the rotting door now thrust, creaking screams align the mire Loosened shadows coughing dust in a world now set afire Worry gathers in the mist, along a crooked staircase rise Nooses hang from rafter’s twist, portraits gaze through swollen eyes Smell the stench of fevers past, sweat does stream of wallowed reach Moors in line of wretched cast, lessons taught but not to teach Break this bread of mirrored shard, slurp your lime serrated drink Write as if a napkin bard, any thought with which you think Last, these days of sorted lanes, walking chains and lockets bore Weakness in your heart now claims of a time you lived before Stare the darkness now you keep, forcing out a sad regret You shall sow the fear you reap as the night collects your debt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 29, 2017 at 9:35 AM
This is a spooky one Chris, and just before I turn in for sleep - it's night in my part of the world. My muse better not keep me awake...Maria
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June 29, 2017 at 9:40 AM
Ooops, I should have put a warning label on this one. :) Thanks so much Maria and I hope you have a great evening
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June 29, 2017 at 8:14 AM
"Walking chains and lockets bore" and "as the night collects your debt" indeed a creepy one! Well done, Chris!
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June 29, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Thanks so much Kim. I guess I have a creepy side as well. :)
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June 29, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Love this scary tale. I am glad though that I read it this morning, and not yesterday right before I went to sleep ;p
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June 29, 2017 at 8:18 AM
That is a good thing. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 12:43 AM
A dark write, though strangely I found it very soothingly rhythmic :)
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June 29, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Thanks so much Jo. That is always what I shoot for when I write rhyming poetry. I hope for the reader to be taken away by the melody. I appreciate you my friend.
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June 28, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Yes, I agree dark and chilling, kind of makes you think of evil, then at the end - I was thinking "I'm sure glad I sleep good at night" :) Well done Chris
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June 29, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. Yep, a little evil and a little darkness escapes from me every now and then. :)
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June 28, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Wow is this one dark-I can hear Vincent Price's voice while reading it... :) So chilling, very good Chris :)
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June 29, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thanks for saying so Sara, that is really cool to think about.
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June 28, 2017 at 6:44 PM
Beautiful, Chris. I mean, WAY.
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June 29, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Thanks so much Dale.
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June 28, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Hey, Chris, it's the 4th of July that's coming - not Hallowe'en!
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June 29, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Oh yeah...thanks for reminding me. :) Thank you so much my friend.
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June 28, 2017 at 5:52 PM
ohh chris, the law of consequence bites!... a stirring piece that makes one examine his own conscience... huggs
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June 29, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so very much Nette. I appreciate your visit and kindness
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June 28, 2017 at 5:41 PM
I just love this Chris :)
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June 28, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Thanks so much Gary.
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June 28, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Wow that is a scary deep one Chris! You have the ability to write a wide range of writing. :)
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June 28, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Thanks Heidi, just thought I'd toss a dark one out there
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