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As the Long Day Ends

As the long day ends ~ Padded poetic phrases recline, softness invites extended stays within deep cushioned desires comfort stitched of woven words Arm chair wishes beneath pressed tin ceilings offer relaxation penned in durable ink Put your feet up, clear your mind while literary whispers relieve burdens in past tense delusions, quietly wafting as dreams take flight upon pillowed emotions Cozy creations silently soothe tired thoughts and anguished promises, calming sunset endeavors as the long day ends Good night Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/24/2018 12:09:00 PM
Poetry is a wonderful way to end the day and I can imagine you sitting in that chair composing this delight. A joy to read this morning Chris! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 12:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie. I always look forward to your visits to my poetry
Date: 10/24/2018 4:50:00 AM
Your poetry ought to be read in a rocking chair Chris, have a wonderful day.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so very much Pixie Dust
Date: 10/24/2018 1:32:00 AM
A fitting tribute for the good night...good nite my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much WW. I appreciate your nice comment.
Date: 10/23/2018 7:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Chris! I'm glad you are still around, my friend! This poem just made my day. Good night
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Have a great night
Date: 10/23/2018 6:58:00 PM
What a way to close a day. This was well written with nicely flowing words. That made you feel like you were there experiencing it.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks so very much Bette. I am glad you liked it
Date: 10/23/2018 6:38:00 PM
hey chris! i especially love the "comfort stitched of woven words" - so poetic! this is beautifully written...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Ilene for your kindness
Date: 10/23/2018 6:24:00 PM
Lovely, Chris. Thank you and good night.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:40:00 AM
Good night my friend. Thanks so much
Date: 10/23/2018 5:56:00 PM
A calming, relaxing end to a long day. Well written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi

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